Twilight Blood by [name removed to protect the innocent]
Summary inside.
Your summary belongs in the summary space. If I don't see an interesting summary, I'm not going to click the link. I'm sorry if your summary's too long; deal with it. We all have to. Sorry, just...bugs me when people do this. Pet peeve, I guess.
And Twilight Blood just reeks of bad vampire AU AkuRoku, which I am pleasently surprised to see it isn't. On the down side, you refer to Cloud as Clo-chan. Just...whut?
And okay, I'll come clean. This rant is really just so I can share with the sanest part of the KH fandom that AKIRA ISHIDA IS ZEXION ZOMG. *ded. heaven. whut*
Edit: And just because I like sharing...
Vexen = C-3PO. I shit you not. Also? HOJO.
Lexaeus = The Governator. No, seriously. Also, Selvester Stalone, the Kyuubi no Youko... and TIGGER.
Marluxia = Die Another Day's James Bond, whut. That's right, Marly's Sean Connerey I FAIL SO HARD. I meant Pierce Brosnan D:
Larxene = Okay, the only ones I recognize are Seong Mi-Na...and Chun-Li!