I don't know who even still reads this but...

[kenoki112]

This is the story for my advanced fiction class, draft 1.  I'm trying to get some feed back before it get work shopped in class the first week of June.  I know it's long for l/j but if you have some time any comments would be awesome.

The Point of Conception

Halloween this year will be interesting. I decided on my costume last night. I actually

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[xseeramuunx]

Was it assigned to be so short? Just asking, because I feel the ending was abrupt also. It made me go through so many emotions so quickly. No wonder you want to be a writer, I feel like I just rode an emotional roller coaster.

[kenoki112]

It was assigned to be 5-25 pages. Double spaced. It is no worries. Do you feel like the end should be that abrupt? I feel like things in real life do end abruptly. The pregnancy ends that way so I feel the story should too but if you think it's bad tell me.