The Elites (fanfic) - CHAPTER 12

Oct 22, 2010 18:44

Title: The Elites 
Author: kemshu 
Pairing: HSJ X OC, (but more on) Yamada Ryosuke X OC
Rating: PG 
Genre: Comedy, Romance (?), Fluff
Summary: 
New to the “Land of the Rising Sun," Yuri is struggling to find happiness in her new life. She had no idea that her grandparents, being members of a renowned group called "The Elites," are actually one of the ( Read more... )

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columbin3 October 22 2010, 15:11:27 UTC
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! O_O
NGANONG C YUYA MAN????!!!!!
I thought its yabu, or kei, or hikaru.... apil nlang sad c daiki -- but Yuya??!
YUUUUUUUUUUYYYYAAAAAAA??!!
Ehhh??!
**buffering, buffering..

nagno man Kim??
so kinsa diay pair ni Yuri? Aii, either yamachan or chii man diay to xa noh.. Ahh!

pero ka-mubo! >_<
nabitin ako!!
upload faster!!! CGE NA!!

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kemshu October 27 2010, 06:42:26 UTC
na-shock ka nga si Yuya?? Ahahaha!! Dear, si Sam man gud na. Wahahaha!!!
At least nang-gawas na tanang Jump. Hehe..

Di pud ko sure kung kinsa pair ni Yuri. Pero lain pud keu kung si YUya. Dili sila ka-age! Wahaha!!!

Lageh, mubo ra jud daw. Sorry ha!
XDD

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columbin3 October 27 2010, 16:29:50 UTC
hahaha!!
lageh, na-mix nako tanan mga fanfics sa world mao toh na-shock ko na c yuya... cge lang, uso man na! haha!!

hmm.. boto ako ky YURIxYamada or YURIxChii. so in other words -- neutral. go w/ the flow lang ko. haha!!

update nya ha!!
mejo nabitin ako eh!

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kemshu November 2 2010, 05:16:38 UTC
ahahaha!!! Neutral - wat a word to use!

Okie2x! Update na niya ko.

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morilyn October 23 2010, 02:35:14 UTC
hehhehe..,yuya-kun never pop's on my mind na sya d i ma savior ni sam..i though yuri like yuya..,hhahaha.,basta make yama-chan suffer..,bwahahahhaha,.,yuya really is bakaki..,hehhehehehe(peace).,mobo rajd kau ang story ai..,next chapt napd..,hheheh,(i can wait though but not that long)

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kemshu October 27 2010, 06:44:53 UTC
ahahahaha!!! Mao2x ra jud mo'g gipang-comment ai. Mura diay ug di si Yuya?? Hehe..

Yeah! MAke-Yamada suffer!!!
HOW?? O.o

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morilyn October 28 2010, 09:19:49 UTC
hahhaha//.d man gd jd halata na si yuya to..,will cguro wa sa nature ni yuya na mo save..,hehehhe(peace).,how to make yama-chan suffer?(hmm..,will f yama-chan fall 4 yuri then.,the only thing to do is make him jealous).,bwahhhahaha..,f d man jd sya ma develop ni yuri then how about making him jealous from chinen..,(ipa close jd sila chii ug yuri..,hahahaha yamachii na dayn)..hehhehe

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kemshu November 2 2010, 05:14:41 UTC
hala! kalain pud anang wala sa nature nga mo save oie. Ing-ana nlang jud ka bad boy?

Ahahaha!!! Naa naman gi-share si divine para ma nindot ang story. Hurot na akong kilig bones -- ai, wala jud diay ko ana. Puro rako kabuang.

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morilyn October 23 2010, 02:37:50 UTC
yabu-kun by the way is always the best..,hahahhahaha!.,go yabu-kun..,I just love yabu being like the mother of the group..,heheheh

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kemshu October 27 2010, 06:45:23 UTC
YABU-NII!!!!

XDD

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kamui_lee_chan October 25 2010, 02:59:19 UTC
welcome back after years of hibernation! LOL.
ka char ni yuya nimu.
"can't take her off my mind" best line ever! hahah^^

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kemshu October 27 2010, 06:46:21 UTC
wahahahaha!!! Thank you. Thank you. Nabuhay narin sa wakas!!!
Pwede para ako nalang na nga line?? Hehe..XD

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kamui_lee_chan October 27 2010, 23:40:12 UTC
but if i know busy napud ang beauty next sem noh?
imuha jud na na line noh, kay mu imagine ko imuha character ay ikaw kim! hehehe^^

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kemshu November 2 2010, 05:09:35 UTC
UO!! Magka-busy jud. Pero ana sila wala na daw notes. Nangayabag naman gani diri, kiwaw man gud nga way i-notes then mag pre-test.

Ahahaha!! Mo dako man pud atong atai ana ate oie. Ako jud? Wait, si kinsa? Sam o Yuri?? O.o

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