FIC: Interlude: Aang (The Taking Turns series)

[keelywolfe]

Interlude: Aang
By Keelywolfe
PG
Sokka/Zuko

Summary: Set during the previous story, Manly Pursuits

Fifth in a series:

No Turning Back
Division of Time
Conflicted
Manly Pursuits

Comments

[keelywolfe]

LOL! Poor Aang. That's ok, I'm sure his suffering will have a purpose. ;)

[akiko]

Awkward! But not as awkward as if they'd noticed him. Boy, that would be weird.

[keelywolfe]

Weird, yes. *G* Thank you!

[avocado_love]

I think it's amazing how well you had Aang's voice down. The part with the banister? Comedy? And was it me, or was Aang more turned on than disturbed by walking in on Zuko and Sokka? Haha! This was great stuff. Their secret is out now, and this series is just getting better and better with every part.

[keelywolfe]

Thank you so much! Hmm, we'll have to see what happens now that the secret is getting around. Although Aang does seem to be able to keep a secret disturbingly well.

[yami_chan]

Aw poor Aang, catching pretty bois making out. XD

Anyway, Aang's voice is perfect. The banister and the complaining about better adventures. Amazing. Aang's reaction seem a bit mixed though. All shocked and OMG-my-eyes yet aroused or curious. I can't put my finger on the right word.

As always, this is magnificent. I'm so glad to see another piece! =D

[keelywolfe]

Yeah, the poor suffering guy. *G* Why don't I ever walk in on things like that?

Thank you!

[asm613]

((( They were...kissing and touching and little grunts and noises and wow, this was not at all the kind of adventure he'd wanted to get in on.)))___here it seems like Aang is not at all into this scene and doesn't want to 'get in on' it.

(((that little sound Sokka had made, sweet and high and pleading, was echoing in the back of Aang's head.
It made him blush, skin overheating all over again... Aang stripped down and got into bed, closing his eyes against a memory that came with its own weird music, moans and sighs, the soft sound of lips touching, and sleep was a long, long time coming.)))___Here you have Aang seeming to enjoy what he saw. Does this contradict the fact that earlier you had him not want to get in on this adventure with them.

[keelywolfe]

I think of it more as Aang not being sure how he feels about it. He specifially says he doesn't want in on the adventure but then he also runs to take a cold bath. Being that this is the first time he's really seen anything like that, I'd like to think he's just understandably conflicted. Even if he doesn't want to try it, it might still be a little exciting to see it. :)

[asm613]

He's, young here then. Kind of like first exposure and first time even considering such a thing. Makes sense.