Wrote this in an hour before work, and I'm posting it before I think better of it. Title to follow later. Title done! Some small revisions throughout
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ohmygoodness! ::flail:: If this is schmoop, I want schmoop all the time. Ianto fucking Jack over the desk is a great image, and everything builds from there emotionally to the last bits, and at the end, I'm left going 'awww' rather incoherently. Plus? Is hot. A+.
Will I have to turn in my Certified Curmudgeon card? hee, you could just be curmudgeonly about it if they demand its return ;)
You have been commenting v. faithfully btw. Don't think I haven't noticed! ::SKOOSH:: Yaaay! (I literally got v. excited about this just now and Muppet sounded a bit jealous when I told her it was b/c I got a skoosh from you.)
P.S. your icon is as dorky as dorky can be. you big dork. Guilty as charged, Your Curmudgeonliness. You know you love it.
you could just be curmudgeonly about it if they demand its return That is a very good point. Also, I can grip the card in my teeth and growl. That'll make 'em think twice. >D
Tell Muppet that she need not be jealous, for there shall be numerous RL skooshes in a few weeks' time, and that I am constantly stalking her LJ like some creepy lurker stalker thing, and I want pictures of the dress, and expect the leather bustier to be modeled at some point.
Oh god. Please tell Muppet that I'm not *really* some creepy stalker lesbian, I just... there's something about her that makes me... dammit. Not making this better. >.
I lurke in your generale directionneorder_of_chaosOctober 19 2008, 21:26:42 UTC
No, no, no, no - you are forbidden to think better of this; this is gorgeous!
and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Ianto smiles and rests his palm against Jack's hip, gives a few short thrusts to keep him pliant. Jack concentrates on breathing. aside from maybe the last paragraph, my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I have but to glance to find Ianto patting the small of Jack's back, or gripping his bicep or rubbing his thumb against the nape of his neck. It goes right through the fic, and it's lovely.
"This won't take long," says Ianto soothingly. He reconsiders. "Well," he says, uncapping the marker. "Maybe it will." smirk-grin
Jack laughs, breathlessly because Ianto thrusts into him short and sharp, a few long seconds of the pace that Jack is asking for. Was asking for, before he decided that Ianto sometimes knows him better than he knows himself. mmmmmmyes :)
He sees words like "safe" and "frightening." He sees "
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Re: I lurke in your generale directionnekayliemalinzaOctober 20 2008, 02:46:16 UTC
Wow, people have liked this way more than I thought they would. I think that might be because I'm allergic to romance. >>
and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no niiiiiiiiiiiiice Is it ok that this was my reaction, too?
my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I think I read someone's meta once, or just a comment, idk, but they were complaining/concerned that Ianto was so stand-offish and reserved, whereas Jack was so tactile... they were upset that Ianto was 'changing' Jack into a subdued and non-touchy person. That comment must have been in the back of my mind during this; it definitely was during "Bezoar for Touching." We've talked about the touching thing before, haven't we? Anyways. I feel like Ianto is very professional but when touching is appropriate, such as during sex, he will be more than adequate. >>
Thanks! I was hesitant about the ending-- I have a low tolerance for schmoopy things-- but luckily I had to go to work and didn't have time to re-think it.
WINNER. WTF THE ENDING, PHWOAR. I hope this isn't all I can think about in the exam. "The dephosphorylated Ras protein is bound by the SH2 domain of Jack's dimpled lower back... oh shit."
"The dephosphorylated Ras protein is bound by the SH2 domain of Jack's dimpled lower back... oh shit."
Excuse me. Excuse me. This is the second comment in as many days that has caused me to bust out laughing. What do you have to say for yourself, hmm? Hmm?? ::taps foot::
Wow, I think the Metabo-Porn worked! Ok, so the fic is rated PG, but there are lower-back dimples in your honour. And, frankly, it's porn. PG rating irregardless.
The Tosh!WIN icon visits good fortune and awesome upon every person it doth touch, yae verily. Forsooth, bitches.
Has Sweet-Bean dragged you into Torchwood, too, or did you just follow the sound of uncontrolled "aww"ing down the hallway and decide to read it regardless of not having seen the show? >D
Stephanie gave me a verbal rundown of Torchwood... so that I have a serious affection for Jack and Ianto even if I've never seen/met them. I'm working on watching Torchwood. These things take time.
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(Also, your icon makes me squee. Is made of win!)
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You have been commenting v. faithfully btw. Don't think I haven't noticed! ::SKOOSH::
I'm left going 'awww' rather incoherently.
I can imagine. In fact, I have video! :D
I totally wish I had made that icon. Sadly, I just stole it as fast as it could be stolen. _eri_ made it, posted here.
P.S. your icon is as dorky as dorky can be. you big dork.
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hee, you could just be curmudgeonly about it if they demand its return ;)
You have been commenting v. faithfully btw. Don't think I haven't noticed! ::SKOOSH::
Yaaay! (I literally got v. excited about this just now and Muppet sounded a bit jealous when I told her it was b/c I got a skoosh from you.)
P.S. your icon is as dorky as dorky can be. you big dork.
Guilty as charged, Your Curmudgeonliness. You know you love it.
::is off to steal some icons::
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That is a very good point. Also, I can grip the card in my teeth and growl. That'll make 'em think twice. >D
Tell Muppet that she need not be jealous, for there shall be numerous RL skooshes in a few weeks' time, and that I am constantly stalking her LJ like some creepy lurker stalker thing, and I want pictures of the dress, and expect the leather bustier to be modeled at some point.
Oh god. Please tell Muppet that I'm not *really* some creepy stalker lesbian, I just... there's something about her that makes me... dammit. Not making this better. >.
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and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no
niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Ianto smiles and rests his palm against Jack's hip, gives a few short thrusts to keep him pliant. Jack concentrates on breathing.
aside from maybe the last paragraph, my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I have but to glance to find Ianto patting the small of Jack's back, or gripping his bicep or rubbing his thumb against the nape of his neck. It goes right through the fic, and it's lovely.
"This won't take long," says Ianto soothingly. He reconsiders. "Well," he says, uncapping the marker. "Maybe it will."
smirk-grin
Jack laughs, breathlessly because Ianto thrusts into him short and sharp, a few long seconds of the pace that Jack is asking for. Was asking for, before he decided that Ianto sometimes knows him better than he knows himself.
mmmmmmyes :)
He sees words like "safe" and "frightening." He sees " ( ... )
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and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no
niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Is it ok that this was my reaction, too?
my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways.
I think I read someone's meta once, or just a comment, idk, but they were complaining/concerned that Ianto was so stand-offish and reserved, whereas Jack was so tactile... they were upset that Ianto was 'changing' Jack into a subdued and non-touchy person. That comment must have been in the back of my mind during this; it definitely was during "Bezoar for Touching." We've talked about the touching thing before, haven't we? Anyways. I feel like Ianto is very professional but when touching is appropriate, such as during sex, he will be more than adequate. >>
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Excuse me. Excuse me. This is the second comment in as many days that has caused me to bust out laughing. What do you have to say for yourself, hmm? Hmm?? ::taps foot::
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Hey, I got the Tosh!WIN icon TWICE. That's so cool.
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The Tosh!WIN icon visits good fortune and awesome upon every person it doth touch, yae verily. Forsooth, bitches.
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That was really really nice.
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Has Sweet-Bean dragged you into Torchwood, too, or did you just follow the sound of uncontrolled "aww"ing down the hallway and decide to read it regardless of not having seen the show? >D
Either way, thanks. ^_^
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THIS IS IMPORTANT.
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