Wrote this in an hour before work, and I'm posting it before I think better of it. Title to follow later. Title done! Some small revisions throughout
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I lurke in your generale directionneorder_of_chaosOctober 19 2008, 21:26:42 UTC
No, no, no, no - you are forbidden to think better of this; this is gorgeous!
and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Ianto smiles and rests his palm against Jack's hip, gives a few short thrusts to keep him pliant. Jack concentrates on breathing. aside from maybe the last paragraph, my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I have but to glance to find Ianto patting the small of Jack's back, or gripping his bicep or rubbing his thumb against the nape of his neck. It goes right through the fic, and it's lovely.
"This won't take long," says Ianto soothingly. He reconsiders. "Well," he says, uncapping the marker. "Maybe it will." smirk-grin
Jack laughs, breathlessly because Ianto thrusts into him short and sharp, a few long seconds of the pace that Jack is asking for. Was asking for, before he decided that Ianto sometimes knows him better than he knows himself. mmmmmmyes :)
He sees words like "safe" and "frightening." He sees "challenge," "boundaries." He sees "I trust you more than I could ever trust myself." The list isn't signed; it just says "Thank you." so very, very beautiful
Re: I lurke in your generale directionnekayliemalinzaOctober 20 2008, 02:46:16 UTC
Wow, people have liked this way more than I thought they would. I think that might be because I'm allergic to romance. >>
and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no niiiiiiiiiiiiice Is it ok that this was my reaction, too?
my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I think I read someone's meta once, or just a comment, idk, but they were complaining/concerned that Ianto was so stand-offish and reserved, whereas Jack was so tactile... they were upset that Ianto was 'changing' Jack into a subdued and non-touchy person. That comment must have been in the back of my mind during this; it definitely was during "Bezoar for Touching." We've talked about the touching thing before, haven't we? Anyways. I feel like Ianto is very professional but when touching is appropriate, such as during sex, he will be more than adequate. >>
and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no
niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Ianto smiles and rests his palm against Jack's hip, gives a few short thrusts to keep him pliant. Jack concentrates on breathing.
aside from maybe the last paragraph, my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways. I have but to glance to find Ianto patting the small of Jack's back, or gripping his bicep or rubbing his thumb against the nape of his neck. It goes right through the fic, and it's lovely.
"This won't take long," says Ianto soothingly. He reconsiders. "Well," he says, uncapping the marker. "Maybe it will."
smirk-grin
Jack laughs, breathlessly because Ianto thrusts into him short and sharp, a few long seconds of the pace that Jack is asking for. Was asking for, before he decided that Ianto sometimes knows him better than he knows himself.
mmmmmmyes :)
He sees words like "safe" and "frightening." He sees "challenge," "boundaries." He sees "I trust you more than I could ever trust myself." The list isn't signed; it just says "Thank you."
so very, very beautiful
loved it!
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and Jack calls faster, faster, please then shivers when Ianto says no
niiiiiiiiiiiiice
Is it ok that this was my reaction, too?
my favourite thing about this is Ianto touching Jack - so often, in so many different ways.
I think I read someone's meta once, or just a comment, idk, but they were complaining/concerned that Ianto was so stand-offish and reserved, whereas Jack was so tactile... they were upset that Ianto was 'changing' Jack into a subdued and non-touchy person. That comment must have been in the back of my mind during this; it definitely was during "Bezoar for Touching." We've talked about the touching thing before, haven't we? Anyways. I feel like Ianto is very professional but when touching is appropriate, such as during sex, he will be more than adequate. >>
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