Tomorrow - Oneshot

[kayjayloves]

Title: Tomorrow
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Changmin!centric (hints of Jaemin, dabbles of Shichul)
Band: DBSK/TVXQ/THSK; Super Junior
Genre: drama/action/Anyband!verse 
Rating: PG-16
Warning: cussing, heavy themes (violence)
Disclaimer: 'fraid I don't own these loves.

Synopsis: The other side of revolution. Their words: “What’s revolution

Comments

[gucci_shoes]

I loved this. It was beautifully worded. That's really all I can say.

It was wonderful. I'll use my beach shoes Icon for this one.

[kayjayloves]

Oo, pretty icon xD And thank you so much!

<333 for the comment!

[zoolooney]

O.O So amazing. All from Changmin's POV, and I love the flow of the overall piece, how the times are separated.

Why does it not really surprise me that Heechul is a firebug? XD

And the reference to the Anyband characters made me LOL, because I can just see Heechul's disgusted sarcastic face (at least, I am assumming that Heechul's the one who said that line).

Great job!

[kayjayloves]

Hahaha, Heechul as a firebug is so oddly fitting, neh? >_> *pats him*

Yeah xDD I wanted to show how there's more ways people go about a revolution, and it makes sense they'd be all disgusted by the Anyband character's way XP

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[spinintriangles]

just.
beautiful.
♥

[kayjayloves]

^^ Thank you

<333 for the comment~

[firelights]

SPOT WILL COMMENT LATER.

[firelights]

It was a really late spot, but the point is, it was a spot, okay!

Anyway.

Just, first: "the whole thing is with music - can you image?" I think you meant imagine. :)

Next.

That was.

It was.

Oh my goodness. OH MY GOODNESS. IT WAS EFFING BRILLIANT. WHAT THE HELL IT WAS AMAZING.

I love the countdown to the end (or is it the beginning?), how they laugh at the pacifists because that adds a certain tinge of realism in. I need to write more anyband now because that plot I'd forgotten is tickling my brain again. But I dunno. That chaptered fic is also there. Bah.

Anyway!

A shot rings out. Your ten minutes of fame start now.

I love the intro - it's so real and tangible and just guh.

for the greater good.

That's always been a controversial line. ♥

AND THE JAEMIN PLEASE EXCUSE MY BIAS BUT THE JAEMIN BABY.

Heechul the arsonist and Yoochun the peacekeeper. EVERYTHING MAKES SO MUCH SENSE. YOU ARE A GENIUS. I DON'T CARE IF I ALREADY POINTED THESE THINGS OUT BEFORE.

The discovery of the guns. How Changmin can still laugh. How he's

[kayjayloves]

*BOUNCES*

(thank you for catching the typo ♥ xD)

I KNOW WE'VE ALL READY TALKED ON MSN. BUT GAH. STILL SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT XDD

for the greater good.

That's always been a controversial line. ♥
Aish, isn't it? And really, I think this whole piece could be taken as controversial XD I mean, it's violence to get freedom - that's something that's always had mixed feelings surrounding it.

Such delicious symbolism in the dream. *_______*
YOU SAW IT. YOU SAW IT! Haha, you always seem to catch the things that I put in there and are so subtle a lot of people don't notice. XDD

MEMING? <33333333333333 ILUSM XD

♥ FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT LIKE ALWAYS. ^^v

[firelights]

YOU SAW IT. YOU SAW IT! Haha, you always seem to catch the things that I put in there and are so subtle a lot of people don't notice. XDD

I dunno how I do it but I'm glad how I somehow always do. xD

♥

[kayjayloves]

Nya, I'm so glad you liked it ^^

<333 for the comment!