Tomorrow - Oneshot

[kayjayloves]

Title: Tomorrow
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Changmin!centric (hints of Jaemin, dabbles of Shichul)
Band: DBSK/TVXQ/THSK; Super Junior
Genre: drama/action/Anyband!verse 
Rating: PG-16
Warning: cussing, heavy themes (violence)
Disclaimer: 'fraid I don't own these loves.

Synopsis: The other side of revolution. Their words: “What’s revolution

Comments

[firelights]

It was a really late spot, but the point is, it was a spot, okay!

Anyway.

Just, first: "the whole thing is with music - can you image?" I think you meant imagine. :)

Next.

That was.

It was.

Oh my goodness. OH MY GOODNESS. IT WAS EFFING BRILLIANT. WHAT THE HELL IT WAS AMAZING.

I love the countdown to the end (or is it the beginning?), how they laugh at the pacifists because that adds a certain tinge of realism in. I need to write more anyband now because that plot I'd forgotten is tickling my brain again. But I dunno. That chaptered fic is also there. Bah.

Anyway!

A shot rings out. Your ten minutes of fame start now.

I love the intro - it's so real and tangible and just guh.

for the greater good.

That's always been a controversial line. ♥

AND THE JAEMIN PLEASE EXCUSE MY BIAS BUT THE JAEMIN BABY.

Heechul the arsonist and Yoochun the peacekeeper. EVERYTHING MAKES SO MUCH SENSE. YOU ARE A GENIUS. I DON'T CARE IF I ALREADY POINTED THESE THINGS OUT BEFORE.

The discovery of the guns. How Changmin can still laugh. How he's broken, how they all kind of are. *_* ♥ ♥

You’re dreaming of the sea, laughter and your mother calling for you (“Come back, Changmin! It’s dangerous out there where the undertow is") when Jaejoong nudges you awake. His eyes are hardened and his face solemn, but his voice is as soft as always. “Today.”

Such delicious symbolism in the dream. *_______*

AND THE ENDING.

[kayjayloves]

*BOUNCES*

(thank you for catching the typo ♥ xD)

I KNOW WE'VE ALL READY TALKED ON MSN. BUT GAH. STILL SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT XDD

for the greater good.

That's always been a controversial line. ♥
Aish, isn't it? And really, I think this whole piece could be taken as controversial XD I mean, it's violence to get freedom - that's something that's always had mixed feelings surrounding it.

Such delicious symbolism in the dream. *_______*
YOU SAW IT. YOU SAW IT! Haha, you always seem to catch the things that I put in there and are so subtle a lot of people don't notice. XDD

MEMING? <33333333333333 ILUSM XD

♥ FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT LIKE ALWAYS. ^^v

[firelights]

YOU SAW IT. YOU SAW IT! Haha, you always seem to catch the things that I put in there and are so subtle a lot of people don't notice. XDD

I dunno how I do it but I'm glad how I somehow always do. xD

♥