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kawaii_shaii

Paper Clouds - Tora x Saga

Jul 27, 2009 14:29

Title: Paper Clouds
Author: Me
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alice nine, reita, paper clouds, the gazette, saga, tora

Comments 5

danzo_radpants July 27 2009, 18:00:33 UTC

*snort* not a problem, darling

I think my ending is crucial to understanding the text as a whole. Without it the symbolism makes no sense, and you cannot really analyse Tora's character!

I actually love this.
Because it's so full of emotion.
And you convey said emotion rather wonderfully.

:D

kawaii_shaii July 27 2009, 18:27:47 UTC

XD It really does, doesn't it... Fabulous, seriously. Ties the whole thing together ;D

And thanks, honey :B

silveryxdark July 28 2009, 12:40:55 UTC

Oh, that was lovely and so sad, but just beautiful.

Love the... ending *snort*

kawaii_shaii July 28 2009, 16:13:44 UTC

Neee 83 thanks for reading <3

And hahah, yes~

wilwa August 7 2009, 21:28:01 UTC

Awh, wasn't that just... beautiful. Beautiful written, and I love that you had obth fluff and angst in the story.

Well done!