yuletide reveal: The Ogre Downstairs

Jan 01, 2009 19:42

Yuletide is revealed! The story for me was written by Alexanda, and as soon as the archive is working properly I'll find out her LJ name too.

This year, I haven't been able to do a single batch of recs - I'm not even halfway through the A fandoms yet! (Though I've read a couple of stories here and there for other fandoms.) I figured, with all the people reading and reccing, I'll simply take my time and perhaps do a single recs post here only with my absolute favourites once I'm done.

Anyway, as for the story I wrote, it was Growing Together, for Becca/bookelfe, based on The Ogre Downstairs by Diana Wynne Jones. It was my only story this year (rarely enough), and I didn't expect it to get much attention considering it's rather long and belongs to such a small fandom, but it's been doing okay - not as popular as some of my Yuletide fic, but more than I expected.

It's a gen story, focusing on the life of the children after the book has closed, and I tried to give them each a storyline (but cheated a little bit - Caspar and Malcolm basically have to share one) while unifying the story as a whole. I hope I managed. :-)

I discovered that the biggest challenge in writing it was that DWJ in the book does what fanfic writers Must Not and switched POV in the middle of a scene; I mostly ended up doing POV changes between scenes, but also sometimes in the middle of one, though I tried to make it natural. The second-biggest challenge was to not make Gwinny and Sally too stereotypically feminine (especially considering the knights-in-shining-armour moment!) but I don't know how well I succeeded - but then, the book is written in 1974, I can always tell myself that things were different then. (On a sidenote, trying to fit the world into the 1970s without bringing attention to the fact that it's the 1970s was fun. Certain toys are period-typical, and I tried to make the price of a trampoline fit too. I may be anachronistic in places, I don't know. If so, I hope it doesn't affect people's enjoyment of the story.)

I also discovered that bookelfe's journal is great fun to read, and oh how it itched in me to friend it! I was particularly sad that I couldn't comment on her brilliant summary of The Black Arrow, since it really describes the book perfectly. In the end, I put in a tiny little nod in the story itself.

growing together, diana wynne jones, fic, yuletide, fic talk

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