Scene - Comic Strip
FADE-IN RAINY DAY, INT. CAR Medium-Close shot
KBN, age 26, is in the driver seat, the sound of rain and wind shield wipers loud, overpowering contemporary rock playing lightly on radio.
EXT. RAINY DAY PARKING LOT - WIDE SHOT
Prius pulls into Parking Slot Spot
INT. CAR - CLOSE UP - KBN 45-degree angle
She parks the car, turning off the engine. Grabbing shoulder/messenger bag, umbrella. Opens overhead compartment to grab SUNGLASSES.
EXT. OUTSIDE OF OFFICE BUILDING - MEDIUM SHOT - KBN, FOLLOWED with CAMERA - PROFILE
KBN walks into Office Building, SHOULDER BAG on, UMBRELLA open and held up, GLASSES tucked on her head, holding back her hair.
RAIN is loud, VERY GRAY and DARK OUTSIDE.
INT. OFFICE BUILDING LOBBY - CLOSE UP - ELEVATOR CALL BUTTONS
KBN's hand quickly reaches to press the UP button
MEDIUM SHOT - Elevator Doors/Lobby
KBN walks into Elevator, closing DRIPPING UMBRELLA. She leans to the Left (RIGHT to Camera) and a DING Is heard as a button is pushed.
INT. ELEVATOR CAR - MEDIUM SHOT - Inside of Elevator, facing doors, behind KBN.
Elevator sounds heard as Elevator RISES. 4th floor button is ILLUMINATED. There is a LOUD DING, elevator opens, another passanger gets on.
CLOSE UP SHOT - ELEVATOR FLOOR PANEL
The panel changes from the 2nd - 3rd Floor Lights.
MEDIUM SHOT - Face front KBN and other Passenger.
KBN grabs her glasses, pulling them down over her eyes.
Passanger looks to KBN.
PASSENGER (unsure)
You do know you're indoors now?
KBN (confident)
A - Yup.
KBN nods slightly.
PASSENGER (dubious)
And it's raining out?
KBN (Smiling softly)
I know..
A LOUD DING is heard.
CLOSE UP SHOT - Elevator floor panel - 4th Floor is LIT UP
MEDIUM SHOT - FRONT, showing KBN again - inside Elevator.
As the elevator doors open A BRIGHT IMMERSIVE LIGHT FLOODS THE DIMLY LIT SPACE, Starting as a thin streak that grows into a wide field, blinding the other Passenger, reflecting off KBN's dark sunglasses.
KBN
Have a Good one!
KBN steps forward.
MEDIUM SHOT - Behind the passengers. - KBN walks out and is swallowed up, 'VANISHING' into the blinding light.
END
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I know this seems random, but my office building floor recently underwent remodeling.
It's now EXTREMELY lit and everything is off white. It's BLINDING. I wear my sunglasses indoors with more need than outside.
I just figured it would make a good comic strip.. but barring immediate ability to draw it.. I figured I could script it out :D
tafkad ! Is this format correct?
Promise to draw it soon.
KBN, age 26, is in the driver seat, the sound of rain and wind shield wipers loud, overpowering contemporary rock playing lightly on radio.
EXT. RAINY DAY PARKING LOT - WIDE SHOT
Prius pulls into Parking Slot Spot
INT. CAR - CLOSE UP - KBN 45-degree angle
She parks the car, turning off the engine. Grabbing shoulder/messenger bag, umbrella. Opens overhead compartment to grab SUNGLASSES.
EXT. OUTSIDE OF OFFICE BUILDING - MEDIUM SHOT - KBN, FOLLOWED with CAMERA - PROFILE
KBN walks into Office Building, SHOULDER BAG on, UMBRELLA open and held up, GLASSES tucked on her head, holding back her hair.
RAIN is loud, VERY GRAY and DARK OUTSIDE.
INT. OFFICE BUILDING LOBBY - CLOSE UP - ELEVATOR CALL BUTTONS
KBN's hand quickly reaches to press the UP button
MEDIUM SHOT - Elevator Doors/Lobby
KBN walks into Elevator, closing DRIPPING UMBRELLA. She leans to the Left (RIGHT to Camera) and a DING Is heard as a button is pushed.
INT. ELEVATOR CAR - MEDIUM SHOT - Inside of Elevator, facing doors, behind KBN.
Elevator sounds heard as Elevator RISES. 4th floor button is ILLUMINATED. There is a LOUD DING, elevator opens, another passanger gets on.
CLOSE UP SHOT - ELEVATOR FLOOR PANEL
The panel changes from the 2nd - 3rd Floor Lights.
MEDIUM SHOT - Face front KBN and other Passenger.
KBN grabs her glasses, pulling them down over her eyes.
Passanger looks to KBN.
PASSENGER (unsure)
You do know you're indoors now?
KBN (confident)
A - Yup.
KBN nods slightly.
PASSENGER (dubious)
And it's raining out?
KBN (Smiling softly)
I know..
A LOUD DING is heard.
CLOSE UP SHOT - Elevator floor panel - 4th Floor is LIT UP
MEDIUM SHOT - FRONT, showing KBN again - inside Elevator.
As the elevator doors open A BRIGHT IMMERSIVE LIGHT FLOODS THE DIMLY LIT SPACE, Starting as a thin streak that grows into a wide field, blinding the other Passenger, reflecting off KBN's dark sunglasses.
KBN
Have a Good one!
KBN steps forward.
MEDIUM SHOT - Behind the passengers. - KBN walks out and is swallowed up, 'VANISHING' into the blinding light.
END
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I know this seems random, but my office building floor recently underwent remodeling.
It's now EXTREMELY lit and everything is off white. It's BLINDING. I wear my sunglasses indoors with more need than outside.
I just figured it would make a good comic strip.. but barring immediate ability to draw it.. I figured I could script it out :D
tafkad ! Is this format correct?
Promise to draw it soon.