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[katherine_15]

Title: Broken
Author: Katherine
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Disclaimer: Not mine, don't sue
Dedication: Happy belated birthday aefallen!!!! ::blows kisses::
Summary:

Comments

*CRIES AND CLINGS TO YOU*

[aefallen]

In the end, it was Peter who broke Harry

OH MY GOD, it is this line that breaks me.

And I haven't even read the fic yet.

OH MY GOD. *HUGS YOU TIGHT* OH MY GOD.

I just had to say that first. *clings to you*

Will now cry all over fic until I can collect myself to make a coherent comment.

Oh my God, thank you. *hugs you* This is an unbelievable honour.

Re: *CRIES AND CLINGS TO YOU*

[katherine_15]

::giggles and hugs back::

::pets:: Calm down, calm down.

::makes soothing sounds::

YOU were the one who inspired it sweetheart... you and your lovely writings and your gorgeous spam. How could I resist pretty, pretty Harry when you keep posting his pictures?!

::hearts::

*cries. all over the fic*

[aefallen]

*cries all over the fic*

I completely empathise with your fic title.

*clings to you and cries*

Coherent comment coming up. *hides*

Re: *cries. all over the fic*

[katherine_15]

::pets and makes soothing sounds::

You're a perfect darling.

::hugs and passes tissue::

[aefallen]

And now all he wanted was to plunge it into himself.

Harry. *sobs* This must be exactly how he felt. I never thought of it before reading this fic, but now I realise that must be exactly what he felt.

He had ruthlessly murdered his father, he had mercilessly saved him, he existed.
I love the contrasts between every single example you have here. And in he had mercilessly saved him - that's a lovely one. *grin* I'm certain Harry would have wholeheartedly chosen being hurt by Otto's science experiment over being saved by Spider-man. *smiles*

But ironically, the one to finally break him was Peter.
THIS! The line that broke me! Before even reading your fic! *sobs* I wandered around the house in a daze after reading that line, and I simply couldn't stop thinking about it, even before reading the fic. It is such a simple, powerful concept you have here, and it is its simplicity and its strength which overcomes me. And because it almost seems from the way it is that it's Peter who's going to be the one who's broken, it's perfect when

[katherine_15]

This must be exactly how he felt. I never thought of it before reading this fic, but now I realise that must be exactly what he felt.

My heart broke for poor Harry in that scene. His world was shattered and all Peter could say was that there were bigger things than the two of them.

::thumps Peter::

Can you tell I heart Harry much more than Peter? Hee.

I'm certain Harry would have wholeheartedly chosen being hurt by Otto's science experiment over being saved by Spider-man.

::nods:: The indignity! Poor Harry, to have to be rescued by the person he hated the most.

THIS! The line that broke me! Before even reading your fic! *sobs* I wandered around the house in a daze after reading that line, and I simply couldn't stop thinking about it, even before reading the fic.

::blushes and beams::

::runs up and hugs:: Be careful not to bump into anything, sweetheart.

It is such a simple, powerful concept you have here, and it is its simplicity and its strength which overcomes me. And because it almost seems from the way it is that it's

[aefallen]

Because I needed to restrain my instinct to highlight-copy-italicise the entire second half of your fic and underline-bold everything, then fill up the rest of the entry with unadulterated fangirlism. *hides* (I'm not sure what I'm going to do is very much different, though. *laughter*

And Harry refused to look at Peter, because he knew the traitorous tears were just dying to spill all over the carpet.
Underline-bold-italicise instincts almost uncontrollable at this point. DO YOU KNOW this is priceless. Every fic of yours I have read has always had lines like these - lines that I read and then I have to catch my breath and catch my heart before I realise I've already lost it to the fic in question. *laughter* I can lose my heart to a fic on the strength of one line alone, but THEN you write more, and as such, I'm destroyed

[katherine_15]

Because I needed to restrain my instinct to highlight-copy-italicise the entire second half of your fic and underline-bold everything, then fill up the rest of the entry with unadulterated fangirlism. *hides*

::giggles and adores::

I think this is even more fun than writing the fic!

::beams and drags you out of hiding to hug::

Every fic of yours I have read has always had lines like these - lines that I read and then I have to catch my breath and catch my heart before I realise I've already lost it to the fic in question.

::tears::

::sniffles and hugs:: That was the single most gratifying thing you could have said about my writing. That IS why I write, you made me so incredibly happy, sweetheart. If you say anything nice anymore, i think i'm gonna explode from a surfeit of happiness!

I can lose my heart to a fic on the strength of one line alone, but THEN you write more, and as such, I'm destroyed. ::prompty explodes

[aefallen]

“Do not do that again,” Peter ordered him in a shaking voice as he engulfed Harry in a fierce hug, holding him so tightly it seemed like he could never, would never let go.
First reaction: DON'T YOU EVER DARE LET HIM GO!
I like it when you use "fierce" to describe an embrace. I like it when you use the word "engulfed", too. I love the way Peter commanded Harry never to do that again - Peter, before Spider-man, might not have done that, but Peter after Spider-man could do that, with the authority you have him do this, here. *hugs you* I adore the concept of Peter being the one to tell Harry these things, to stop Harry from hurting himself, of Peter being there for him.

For this time, Harry knew Peter would pick up the pieces and put him together again.
I love the emphasis you have on this time, because it's different this time. *hugs you* And, when you did this:

Author’s note: I would pick up the pieces for you anyday, sweetheart! *hugs*
YOU'RE PRICELESS. And I'm utterly destroyed. *hugs you tight* This means, you mean, so much

[katherine_15]

First reaction: DON'T YOU EVER DARE LET HIM GO!

::nods in agreement::

::glares at Peter for emphasis::

Peter: *gulps*
Harry: *beams*

I love the way Peter commanded Harry never to do that again - Peter, before Spider-man, might not have done that, but Peter after Spider-man could do that, with the authority you have him do this, here.

I think Spiderman gave this new dimension to Peter. And I LOVE the idea of Harry being taken care of.

::squees::

I adore the concept of Peter being the one to tell Harry these things, to stop Harry from hurting himself, of Peter being there for him.

With great power comes great responsibility

With the amount of power Peter has over Harry, he ought to be responsible for Harry too! *g*

YOU'RE PRICELESS. And I'm utterly destroyed. *hugs you tight* This means, you mean, so much to me. *hugs you again* Thank you. Thank you for being there for me. *hugs you again* ::hugs and laughs and hugs tighter