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"Moonlight Sleeping On A Midnight Lake" TW100 Drabble Rating-G

Aug 03, 2010 21:50

Title: Moonlight Sleeping On A Midnight Lake
Fandom: Torchwood
Character: Gwen Cooper (Gen)
Rating: G
Notes: Written for tw100 Challenge #162-Homeless. Unbeta'ed
Summary: Looking for Torchwood.

( Webaba silale maweni )

tw100, jack harkness, gwen cooper

Comments 23

huskyfriends August 4 2010, 06:26:00 UTC

Beautiful look into Gwen's mind, you write her POV very well.

karaokegal August 4 2010, 19:40:53 UTC

Thanks! I embrace Gwen partly because so many have attacked her. I think I write a better Jack or Owen, but I'm glad to hear that this felt right to you.

takisys August 4 2010, 07:42:35 UTC

Nice, very nice. But I'll ask you the same question I would like to ask RTD about the next Torchwood season: Who's going to overlook Cardiff's Rift?

karaokegal August 4 2010, 19:42:20 UTC

Well there's been some talk that the events of the Dr. Who season finale have taken care of that. Besides, Torchwood has always had multiple branches. Jack and Gwen can globetrot and banter and fight aliens as necessary. Thanks for reading and commenting. This was another tricky prompt for me to get a handle on.

takisys August 5 2010, 05:42:36 UTC

It was tricky prompt for me too.

As for doctor who rewriting time I dreamt it of taking care of the 456 incident as well, but I'm not sure RTD wants it.

Can I friend You?

karaokegal August 5 2010, 05:47:39 UTC

Feel free to friend. All styles served here.

I want CoE to end exactly the way it did and for TW4 to start with Jack coming back full as his omni-sexual, polyamorous self, in full smile and swagger to have sex with as many men, women, aliens etc as possible. The Jack we were given in The Empty Child and should have had in Torchwood all along.

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jooles34 August 4 2010, 10:52:49 UTC

What a fabulous drabble. Crackin’ pay off at the end; a great sentiment.

karaokegal August 4 2010, 19:43:07 UTC

Thank you. Tricky prompt for me, because I'm among those who are not overly troubled by the change in Torchwood's condition. Glad you liked.

jooles34 August 9 2010, 15:40:29 UTC

I agree. Torchwood is Torchwood and they'll do whatever they do wherever they need to do it. I'm excited to see what the new changes are.

ebineez01 August 4 2010, 11:15:01 UTC

Torchwood can reign anywhere's. Perfect setup for a new season

karaokegal August 4 2010, 19:43:41 UTC

Exactly. It's not about the Hub. It's about the people. And the Heart. Thanks for reading and commenting.

rustydog August 4 2010, 14:29:49 UTC

Beautiful!

I love the sense of place as well as the philosophical payoff.

ETA - Just looked up the lyrics too -- really neat! I didn't know the song but it's very appropriate.

karaokegal August 4 2010, 19:44:41 UTC

As soon as I saw the prompt, that was the first thing that came to my mind...getting the song into a TW drabble took a bit of work.

Glad you liked.