Title: Eleven Years Later: Special Delivery
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows & Previous Chapters
Characters/Pairings: Teddy Lupin/H.C. Granger (OC)
Word count: 3,712 words
Summary: Teddy gets his letter
Notes: This is a chapter I’ve been waiting to write for months now. Hopefully it turns out well in the end. Headington is real, and is/was
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Great chapter. I was wondering if Caroline was going to get into Hogwarts or not..sucks that he's gonna be snogging Victoire eventually. Hopefully he dumps her quick smart and gets with Caroline.
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I always planned Caroline to be just a Muggle. I was interested in seeing the difference between her and Dudley and Petunia. You know, how a Muggle would be react to being raised in a family that accepts and embraces witches and wizards, yet knowing she was constantly on the outside.
Especially when feelings start to develop between herself and a wizard best friend.
Like I said, plenty more to come.
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And I loved the cognitive dissonance of the opening-not being an online gamer, and not knowing which Hermione you were talking about, it took me quite a while to figure out what was going on. I loved the parallel of Hermione Caroline facing a Troll at eleven-only instead of cowering under the sink, she's the leader of the team.
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As for HC the Muggle... well, I figure there'll be enough kids we know at Hogwarts. Someone on the outside will prove more interesting.
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I thought at first, 'WTH??'. But after I read the line 'Caroline', it all seemed clear. It's weird to read Hermione's line saying "I'm eleven".
LMFAO :D.
I never thought that Caroline would have feelings for Teddy, though. Great twist, as usual! :D
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anyways, seems that the next chapter is going to be interesting. :D
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Anyway, excellent chapter! I wonder though, why Harry wouldn't talk about Teddy's parents. I don't know, it's just me, but I would've expected Harry to understand his godson's predicament.
Or maybe Teddy's just never asked Harry?
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He knew that Teddy would want to know eventually. but, like Dumbledore felt about Harry, Harry thought "when he's older."
Also, Teddy knows that his parents died in the Battle of Hogwarts. He doesn't know anything past that. And, as far as Harry knows, know one else knows, either.
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The only thing I don't "agree" with in your ifcs is how everyone seems to be keeping the war a big secret... in my opinion I don't see them hiding the big things from the kids. But that's just me, because if I was Ginny I'd tell Ted everything.
And I'm really sad now, that Caroline won't be in Hogwarts. :(
Great work! I really loved it!:D
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