[fic]Retribution Epilogue

[kajornwan]

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've

Comments

[anonymous]

Hi :)

My name is Diane and I just wanted to tell you « Cruels Intentions » is one of the best stories I've ever read. Really, you're so talented ! The way you write and the way you discribed feelings is just so beautiful ! I can't tell you how I felt when I read this story, because so much emotions went throught me !

My favorite caracters in this story are probably the Arbatov brothers. The way you created Mikhail's personnality is amazing. I wish someone could love me as much as he loves Feilong (stop dreaming girl, stop dreaming XD). And Alexei Arbatov. Gosh. I'm so glad you created a caracter like him ! (If one day I could meet someone like him in the real life …. *___* well, I suppose I really have to stop dreaming lol). I was so sad when he died. I didn't realize it immediately, but when I realized he was really killed, I cried a little (yes I'm very sensitive and that's why I never wanted to whatch fims like Titanic xD)

I also love the happy ending, it was so cute and beautiful *___*

Your other writings are also very good (« Love » and « All I want for Christmas » are my favorites :)

Good Luck !

PS : Sorry for the mistakes you may seen, I'm French, and my english sucks a lot x)

[kajornwan]

Hi Diane,

Thank you so much for letting me know this. After seven years it does help to know my efforts have not been wasted and that this was appreciated. I'm so very happy to hear you love the Arbatovs. The relationship between Mikhail and Alexei was among my most favorite things to write. It makes Mikhail feel so real in the process, and yes, I do agree with you everyday on wanting someone to love me like Mikhail loves Fei. Oh well, at least in fiction men like that have to exist LOL As for Alexei, I can tell you right now I am still not over him, and I have never really forgiven myself even though I knew it was necessary, that I had killed Alexei.

Ah! Glad you see it as I do, a happy ending!!!

I think your favorite one shots as also my favorites. The third would probably be February First. ^_^

Thank you so much for being here and letting me know this. I will try to write more of them whenever I can.

P.S. I'm Thai and English is really my second language. Your English does not suck!