[fic]Retribution Epilogue

[kajornwan]

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've

Comments

Re: worth the wait

[kajornwan]

Oh you! I will have you know that yours was one of the comments that gave my muse a kick in the butt and got me writing CI again! So thank you so much for not allowing me to leave this unfinished till the next century!

i completely agree with you in ending this now instead of wringing the plot dry until nothing worthy can be produced anymore
I'm glad you understand. I've written them so much that in these last two chapters I had to delete some of the things I wrote because I've forgotten that I'd written it! Can you imagine. It's been too long I can't even remember my own story. Luckily my beta has done a CI triathlon 5 times and remembers those details *hugs her* I do daydream about them after this a lot though so if I even have time or when I get stuck with Obsidian I can probably get something done.

to be honest chapter 19 was quite hard for me to read
I understand and it was supposed to be hard to read. So if it felt suffocating (as opposed to boring) then I'll take that as mission accomplished. I usually don't believe in happy endings, and if I do give them one they will have to go through torture in the highest degree before they deserve it *is sick*. I think it makes love that much more precious. ^_^ So thank you for letting me know it was hard to read in that perspective.

the epilogue was a perfect ending
I'm so happy to hear you think so. To me, there's nothing more flattering to Fei than this, and he is a very very lucky man to have Mikhail. I was so inspired by the movie, "About Time." I don't know if you've seen it, but it's about this guy who can go back to relive his past whenever he wants. And around the end his father taught him to relive everything twice but from a different perspective, and I thought what could be better than Fei having another chance to relive all those moments with Mikhail that he's messed up. If you recall chapter 18, it was what he wanted to do when he was sitting by Mikhail's bedside. And now he really gets to do it and all Mikhail would remember now is the Fei that won't push him away. They can go back to Seychelles and relive the whole Paradise series , perhaps differently. I wonder if I could ever write that, Paradise(again) after CI. So thank you for liking this ending. It means a lot to me.

good luck on your original
Oh I so need a lot of that. Plot? I have no idea how to explain the plot because Obsidian is supposed to span over at least 3 books and revolves around different people for each book. But overall it's a fantasy set in the desert where two races have been at war with each other for generations. It's not BL, but it's similar to CI in the way that it shows how far people are willing go for love (and vengeance). Obsidian is a kind of glass that is extremely sharp when broken, and this story is all about that really, people that become vicious villains from being broken to pieces. I hope I can accomplish all this though >_<

I want to finish that one shot but my muse is not cooperating >_< I owe someone something though, I may write another one. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this and are willing to read more in the future.

P.S. aww so true. *Giggles imagining that too*