[fic]Retribution Epilogue

[kajornwan]

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've

Comments

[char_comet]

Sigh...so sad to see this coming to an end, after many years and chapters of such a fascinating story you've been able to write!!!! =_=
It killed me the way how you made Mikhail tell Fei Long the I loved you, didn’t I? and then I will love you all over again

But...but... Why did you skip the smexy part? How could you do this to us?
We all have waited for so many chapters to see them together again and the way how their physical reunion would have been... and you skipped it?
After reading chapter 19 and how you ended it, I had hoped you would have given us some explosive scene in the epilogue....

You know it's not that I read a yaoi fic (or whatever genre of story) just for the sex (and your stories are so well written and with intense plot that they really don't need to have sex in them to catch the readers interest!), but I really wanted to see if your skill at writing their sex had been unaffected by the long time you haven't write of it!
I hope you didn't do it because you were afraid to be not upto our expectations....
Yeah, because actually to do it better than you did in some old chapters would have been remarkable! :-P

Well, I think I'll forgive you if I can have your promise that someday (hoping very soon) you'll give us some other great Mikhail & Fei Long story ^_^

Thank you so very much for delighting me for such a long time with your great story (and for the other fics too, obviously) and thank you for mentioning me as one of your best friends! *hugs you tight*

[kajornwan]

Thank you for being here without fail, Terry. You have no idea how your presence has pushed me this far. I'm feeling both lost and sad to end this. Me most of all as a writer who has bonded with this for 7 years. But I fear continuing would be dragging this somewhere downwards. You know like TV series that came out one season too many XD

It touches me so to hear that you like those lines because I love them the most too. As to why I skipped the smut, Jani asked me the same thing, and I told her that I feel the moment is too 'pure' for a detailed smex scene that doing so will disrupt the flow of the melancholic feeling of it. I also don't want to end this in a typical yaoi way. But I do totally understand what you mean, and believe me I actually wrote the smut and then deleted it all. They have been apart for so long a good go seems right XD As for my skills at smut, I'll take that challenge in a one shot XD If it's bad I think it has to do with the fact that I cringe at smut lately, even reading them.

Oh I have a few one shots already in the pocket and actually one multichapter half written that I dropped. Will see how muse (and time) says about that.

Thank you again for being here and for keeping me company after all this time *hugs*