[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 12

[kajornwan]

OMG I have been gone for two months!!! *gomen* But this chapter has been done for a while before I left for Italy, and when my dear beta abandoned me because she's so busy right now *hugs her* I kind of feel a bit unconfident about posting on my own T_T But anyway, here it is and I have to get back to work *cries some more

Comments

[kajornwan]

I'm glad to see someone agree with me on Yan. I seriously think he's one of the keys to help Fei get out of this mess and start to love himself more than to keep sticking to Asami and those bad feelings. Not to mention that I like Yan a lot and feel that he's one of the most interesting character in VF that gets thrown away too soon, especially when Fei's mental problem probably has a lot to do with him and Yan's problem probably had a lot to do with Fei. And I'm glad you don't mind my Mik. *yay*

But for the 'getting them all' thingy. I think it's both in Mik's head as much as it's (suppose to be) real. If you look at Fei from the beginning of the series, he has always been kind of evil. Fei has a cause for his evil actions and revenge and he's as passionate about them as much as he's passionate about love which to me is the quality that got me addicted to him in the first place. I do wish to see him like this and I feel his transition in NT was made too soon without enough logical events to back it up. But thank you for your kind and detailed comment. Most of my readers who used to discuss things with me over pages of comments have all fallen out of VF T___T

I hope I won't disappoint you in the next chapter. ^__^