[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 12

[kajornwan]

OMG I have been gone for two months!!! *gomen* But this chapter has been done for a while before I left for Italy, and when my dear beta abandoned me because she's so busy right now *hugs her* I kind of feel a bit unconfident about posting on my own T_T But anyway, here it is and I have to get back to work *cries some more

Comments

[reika_72]

Hi, I'm glad to have seen a new chapter, I immediately passionate about your work, I like the jealousy of Mik for Fei so much, I like it!
thanks * hugs *

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad to see some readers are still reading it too even though I have been gone for so long. Love the jealous Mik too *hugs him* So adorable. Please, Fei, please keep him!!

[nahani22]

Thanks for an interesting chapter. I haven't read your whole story, I'll do it one of these days. I got very interested in this when I noticed you brought Yan Tsui back into the picture. So many possibilities for fascinating stories - and dialogue - between him and Fei Long. Good luck with exploring their relationship, and the memories that come back to them. Those memories are full of sensations, as Yan's touching of Fei in your story shows.
Your Michael seems like flesh and blood, a little bit of jealousy always spices up the soup.
I gathered from the exchange of comments above that your Fei really plans to keep it all: Asami, Aki and the deed. When I read this chapter, I thought right away that this "realization" is just something that takes place in Mick's head and starts to haunt him, making him decide the course over his next actions - actions that will later complicate things, because Fei's got other plans. Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see how you cook the next scenes.

[kajornwan]

I'm glad to see someone agree with me on Yan. I seriously think he's one of the keys to help Fei get out of this mess and start to love himself more than to keep sticking to Asami and those bad feelings. Not to mention that I like Yan a lot and feel that he's one of the most interesting character in VF that gets thrown away too soon, especially when Fei's mental problem probably has a lot to do with him and Yan's problem probably had a lot to do with Fei. And I'm glad you don't mind my Mik. *yay

[angel0399]

*cheers* An update!! If you're adding your own twist here, I do like the idea of Fei trying to get them all (deed, Aki, and Asami) and seeing how Mikhail would react to everything. I think he made his feelings quite clear that night at his mansion, but to see him confront them all would be amazing!

But if you're keeping this with respect to cannon, I'm still looking forward to Fei and Mik meeting again after everything goes down =)

Don't know if you need a proofreader, but my door's always open if you need help. Glad you're back from your holiday, going to read your post now. *hugs*

[kajornwan]

Good to see you! *hugs* I'm glad you like it and that you look forward to the next chapter even though I have less and less time to write T___T But it's also a very hard thing to write, trying to keep the stuff in cannon and adding my own stuff in there >.<

Thanks again for being here, sweetie.

*hugs*

Cruel Intentions and the beta-job

[raine90]

Hi!
I am Raine90 and I just created an account on livejournal, because I really wanted to tell you how awesome your fanfictions are. I really love them! So you've got a new reviewer! +points at herself, smiling nrightly+
I am a great FeixMik Fan too!!!
I also wanted to tell you that if you still haven't a new beta, I would love to take the job, I really want to!

But only, if you haven't a new one allredy. :)

I hope, I'll soon read the next chapter!
See ya!
+hugs+

[alexolgicant]

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY LIKE THIS FICTIONS, Honestly when i fisrt read about this i never thougth this would work but it does and i simply love it.

keep going girl you are doing it awsome. OR AT LEAST FINISH YOUR SIDE STORY PARADISE.

thank you

[kajornwan]

Thank you for your comment. I'm so sorry to disappear for so long but real life situation is crippling my imagination at the moment. But I'm going on vacation in two days, hopefully Ic an write something on the plane ^_^ Thanks for reading and letting me know you enjoy it.