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(for mxrts) A Study in White and Black

Aug 27, 2014 15:10

For: mxrts
Title: A Study in White and Black
Pairings: implied!Kai/D.O, minor!Sehun/Baekhyun, minor!Onew/Key, Onew/Jungah, Choiza/Sulli
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,400
Warnings: Murders, mentions of suicides, and minor WYF shade
Summary: Kim Jongin would have never thought that moving in with Do Kyungsoo would give him in an entirely different perspective ( Read more... )

!fic, with: f(x), with: after school, with: shinee, rating: r, pairing: kai/d.o

Comments 8

yeongwonnie September 6 2014, 14:19:06 UTC

It's a shame no one has commented on this yet so let me just fix this. I'm usually a silent reader but I'm delurking because this is actually good and I don't want whoever wrote this to feel discouraged by the lack of comments. Dear writer, you did good /pats ( ... )

justangel September 23 2014, 03:45:11 UTC

Hello ;u;

First of all, I just want you to know how much I felt to you. Your comment really was what saved me from the deep, shameful pit of self-hating because I honestly thought that this story is a failure. Thank you for liking the bits of details, for noticing the barely-present members' participation in the fic (and the reason why I assigned Luhan as the killer!).

The romance is still budding. The potential is there but I guess, with Kyungsoo being such a self-centered, borderline to sociopath, it will take a long journey and Jongin's infinite passion XD

mxrts September 17 2014, 12:14:33 UTC

First off, I'd like to apologize for the lateness of this comment. ; u ; And second, I'd love to thank you so much for writing this fic for me I mean JNASJJKAANSAKJANSSJKANKJJNSJNAS THE SHERLOCK AU I JUST CAN'T. I mean it's definitely one of my favorite things to read, and the fact that you've chosen to write this one, just... thank you. :>

I love your portrayal of dominant Kyungsoo in this since I'm really fond of that. Teehee. I love how Jongin's portrayed as well, how his characterization fits John well but there are still differences such as the occupation and whatnot. And just reading the entirety of this fic reminds me so much of the perfect chemistry between Sherlock and John, and with Kaisoo it's so easy to imagine them having that chemistry as well. ; u ; Now onto my favorite parts:

It was Jongin who caught Junmyeon peeking out from his study, resignedly mumbling something that sounded like ‘As long as you’re not driving.’
I mean, how is this not everyone's favorite part? T u T Junmyeon is just so precious in this fic.

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justangel November 7 2014, 09:58:03 UTC

I'm happy :'D
At first I thought you were disappointed at this fic, bcos it deviated from the prompt, or probably some other reasons.
I'm glad you like it :'D

bookishvice October 13 2014, 02:28:20 UTC

WHY DOES THIS ONLY HAVE 3 COMMENTS!?!? WHAT KIND OF TRAVESTY IS THIS!?
THIS IS SO ASDFGHHKKLF

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justangel November 7 2014, 09:30:11 UTC

OMG HOW COME I JUST SAW THIS COMMENT I AM SORRY!!
*cough*

Hello, thank you for reading this piece of mediocrity fic ;;
I'm glad you like it! I was quite desperate that no one actually read this story u___u
Thank you <3

bookishvice November 7 2014, 15:32:38 UTC

^___^ this is saved under my AWESOME EXO FIC bookmarks
piece of mediocrity MY FOOT lol

kpop_seb January 29 2017, 10:04:44 UTC

This is so PERFECT OMG
I love it so much
Chanyeol as Lestrade and Sehun as the corpse(???) made me laugh so much,
"His hair was dyed in an odd rainbow colors" killed me
I LAUGHED TOO HARD
And even though I knew what would happen, all of it seemed so new to me (discovering exo's members in the story is so funny)
THIS NEEDS TO BECOME A SERIE, IT'S SO FUNNY AND WELL WRITTEN
I LOVE IT
Chanyeol and Ksoo relationship is like real life ahahahah
Thank you for this beautiful work!

(Sorry for my english c: )