(for mxrts) A Study in White and Black

[parkourdeer]

For: mxrts
Title: A Study in White and Black
Pairings: implied!Kai/D.O, minor!Sehun/Baekhyun, minor!Onew/Key, Onew/Jungah, Choiza/Sulli
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,400
Warnings: Murders, mentions of suicides, and minor WYF shade
Summary: Kim Jongin would have never thought that moving in with Do Kyungsoo would give him in an entirely different perspective

Comments

[yeongwonnie]

It's a shame no one has commented on this yet so let me just fix this. I'm usually a silent reader but I'm delurking because this is actually good and I don't want whoever wrote this to feel discouraged by the lack of comments. Dear writer, you did good /pats

I wanna applaud your perfect portrayal of Kyungsoo. I could totally imagine him being his tiny yet initimidating self easily, it's so in character though this is an alternate universe. I also like how you inserted the other members accurately and of course Luhan would be the psychopath behind the murders, have you seen his laughing face?

Though the romance was barely there, I still loved Kaisoo dynamics here with assertive Kyungsoo and not-so-reluctant Jongin. The whole thing was funny and entertaining which was a nice surprise because I expected it to be dark and gloomy considering the warnings.

Once again, you did great writer, thank you for this nice read!

p.s: the mods might wanna fix the part where the text ended up being all in italic when it was meant to just be for the message line. It's a bit bothersome while reading, thanks! ^^

[justangel]

Hello ;u;

First of all, I just want you to know how much I felt to you. Your comment really was what saved me from the deep, shameful pit of self-hating because I honestly thought that this story is a failure. Thank you for liking the bits of details, for noticing the barely-present members' participation in the fic (and the reason why I assigned Luhan as the killer!).

The romance is still budding. The potential is there but I guess, with Kyungsoo being such a self-centered, borderline to sociopath, it will take a long journey and Jongin's infinite passion XD