Omygosh i thought i was never going to see this prompt come to life! But it did and i really am so so thankful to the author <3 <3 <3 i had pictured a slightly more light-hearted story when i prompted but u really pulled it off and made it your own :) i liked the tone of the story and the characterizations. It's a bit angsty like u said in the author's note but it worked out well. I dunno if u purposely left out telling the readers of some sad background story for ksoo explaining how he got to be the way he is, but i think leaving it out made the story seem more real and we got to focus more on the present.
I also really loved the way u described jongin, beautiful jongin. He really is, isn't he? (but kyungsoo can be beautiful too! :)) jongin and ksoo and the other exo members with their flaws and imperfections. Thanks for making them more relatable. Other things to love in this story: sehun and the way he looks out for kaisoo, how u called luhan 'pretty little thing' (coz he is!), baeksoo, and squint-and-you'll-miss-it suchen :) thanks a lot, author. See u at reveals. xxoo <3 <3 <3
I also really loved the way u described jongin, beautiful jongin. He really is, isn't he? (but kyungsoo can be beautiful too! :)) jongin and ksoo and the other exo members with their flaws and imperfections. Thanks for making them more relatable. Other things to love in this story: sehun and the way he looks out for kaisoo, how u called luhan 'pretty little thing' (coz he is!), baeksoo, and squint-and-you'll-miss-it suchen :) thanks a lot, author. See u at reveals. xxoo <3 <3 <3
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