This is the history essay I wrote on my last test. ...I can't believe I didn't fail.
Roosevelt's New Deal was a success. It was a triumph, noted as a huge success. It would be difficult to overstate the satisfaction the Deal gave people. Roosevelt did what he must because for him to do so showed people that he can get the country out of debt and depression.
Roosevelt's deal was good for everyone. It helped the young, the old and the in-betweens (basically anyone except the ones who were dead). Roosevelt believed there was no sense crying over every mistake. He kept on trying until he ran out of things to fix. He got the work done with the TVA which lead to dams being built and people receiving electricity for less money and he made a new new deal with even more changes in it.
He did not care if people were against him. He stayed inside his deal and gave Americans such great things as Social Security. People were not angry with this, they saw it was a sincere deal and that it really was for the good of everyone. Even though someone else could have helped America he was voted in again. Either way, The New Deal was great and it allowed America to become a better country.
Roosevelt still planned and planned while there was war to do he had things like the FDIC which insured people's money so they would feel safe using banks again. When Americans looked to other countries could say "I'm glad we're not you" because the New Deal made life and business better. America was on the fast track to recovery and finally WWII pushed them over the edge and they were fine again.
America was still alive. Thanks to Roosevelt's New Deal. Through the banks crashing they were still alive. Through the dust bowl they were still alive. Through the debts they faced from World War I they were still alive. They were thriving because of the New Deal which led them to stay alive. Even today some of the things proposed in the New Deal are still alive. The New Deal was a huge success because and parts of it are still alive today.
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I wrote this in maybe ten minutes while trying to stay awake. Spelling/mechanic errors left as they were to show you how bad this essay really was. I... I just couldn't help it.