Title: Some Princes Become Kings (Part 6)
Author: Kagaya Chou (
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Characters/Pairing: Ohtori Kyouya + Suoh Tamaki (friendship/shounen ai)
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1000 (10 drabbles, Kyouya-centric at odd numbers; Tamaki-centric at even)
Summary: A hundred reasons between them, each worth far more
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YOU ADDED TAMA-CHAN'S FATHER!! He is so cool. <3 I just can't wait to see how he comes into the story/drabbles.
Tamaki is truly deserving of the 2nd spot in his class. Gotta love the guy for having the foresight to bring a high collared shirt. Although...I'm sure he didn't really expect to get molested by his friend and use it to cover up the evidence. XD
Adding the 'ever after' part was really sweet. It still kept up with that fairy tales theme. Still, I'm sure not too many fairy tales have the two princes end up together. All in all, the drabbles are wonderful as always! :D
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On his father, I'm a little scared with that, because he can be just as hyper as Tamaki... and then he becomes this business man o.o which feels a little jarring even for me reading it ^^;
As for the shirt, I'm sure it's just that he has one. He considers himself a prince type, right? ^_~ He's still a bit iffy on the two princes together thing though. Thanks again for great feedback!
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so, i look forward for more, it's really well done ^__^
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About the first part of the drabble, I think you kind of lost the 'Kyouya-essence' there. At least, I didn't feel him much in the first part. And also, the jump from the Tamaki "Im-scared-Kyouya-what-are-you-
doing" mode to the Tamaki "Imma-eat-u-
up-darn-interruptions" mode was a bit jarring. Though I loved the Tamaki seme mode. Really.
phenomenally difficult to approach...
-- I liked how this came across to me. It's like, Kyouya was at a loss how to set up a meeting with Nekozawa as IF he's actually afraid of him. Haha.
Oh, the benefits of being Tamaki’s best friend. Kyouya smirked.
-- oh, the kyouya I love returns! More love for the calculating kyouya please!
Last request: More? Please? :D
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Well, now that you said it, it kind of makes sense that Tamaki goes from one extreme to another. It's exactly his personality type. I think that's why Kyouya and Haruhi are the perfect foil for his personality because it takes much effort to ruffle their feathers as opposed to Tamaki's sensitive ones.
, but I wasn't sure if it was jarring in a bad way, or in the way I wanted... or if the way I wanted was bad... Uh, ... *worried look*...It's jarring yes.. in a good way. (Told you I loves seme Tamaki :evil grin:) Though I'm not sure about other readers. I guess that's where subjectivity comes in. If the way you wanted was bad, then... I love you! Hahahahaha!! (:pushes off Bad Tamaki from her mind ( ... )
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