Ouran High School Host Club > Fanfic/Drabbles > Some Princes Become Kings (Part 6)

[kagayachou]

Title: Some Princes Become Kings (Part 6)
Author: Kagaya Chou (my deviantART account is used more than my LJ account)
Characters/Pairing: Ohtori Kyouya + Suoh Tamaki (friendship/shounen ai)
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1000 (10 drabbles, Kyouya-centric at odd numbers; Tamaki-centric at even)
Summary: A hundred reasons between them, each worth far more

Comments

[vietoftheusa]

I just love how you managed to add the chauffer even though he's only been mentioned like, three times. Even if it's only been a brief instant, he seems like a pretty good dude, especially since he was willing to tell Kyouya straight up not to harm his 'master'.

YOU ADDED TAMA-CHAN'S FATHER!! He is so cool. <3 I just can't wait to see how he comes into the story/drabbles.

Tamaki is truly deserving of the 2nd spot in his class. Gotta love the guy for having the foresight to bring a high collared shirt. Although...I'm sure he didn't really expect to get molested by his friend and use it to cover up the evidence. XD

Adding the 'ever after' part was really sweet. It still kept up with that fairy tales theme. Still, I'm sure not too many fairy tales have the two princes end up together. All in all, the drabbles are wonderful as always! :D

[kagayachou]

I think I made a reoccurring side-character out of the chauffeur, and made him a nice guy, because I've met some really kind chauffeur in the past. They were sort of like housekeepers or butlers, in the guardian sense. Let's just say, when people genuinely value and protect those they are supposed to serve as an occupation, the people they serve must really have something worth it in them. That's what I was thinking while writing about Tamaki's chauffeur.

On his father, I'm a little scared with that, because he can be just as hyper as Tamaki... and then he becomes this business man o.o which feels a little jarring even for me reading it ^^;

As for the shirt, I'm sure it's just that he has one. He considers himself a prince type, right? ^_~ He's still a bit iffy on the two princes together thing though. Thanks again for great feedback!

[myth720]

i was recced this series, and i was pretty skeptical at first because i don't really like drabbles and also because i felt serious fiction with these characters may be too OOC. but i was pleasantly surprised. i enjoy the series, it's written well and the drabbles are flowing nicely and matching. i like how it developes and theres even some little fluff that makes me secretly squee x3

so, i look forward for more, it's really well done ^__^

[kagayachou]

It's very nice to hear that you think I've kept the characters IC. I wouldn't know how serious this piece of fiction really is, but I'm happy it's been taken seriously. Thank you, especially for commenting! Mostly, I'm happy to know that you enjoyed this, despite not liking drabbles. I didn't like them myself, but I told myself I shouldn't knock it 'til I tried it... hence, these drabbles. Writing them was a bit of a learning process actually. I hope I will continue not to disappoint ^_~

[goddessjeneveve]

Very good. Looooove it. <333 You must continue. ^o^ Aw, Tamaki. ^o^

[kagayachou]

Aw, thanks ^_^ Will do.

[goddessjeneveve]

Hey. Just wanted to check and see if you got my chapter 3 since I haven't heard from ya in a day. Hope you're doing okay. ^o^

[kagayachou]

Gots! Unavailable online all day yesterday. Just betaed chapter 3 and replied the email ^_^

[satora_chan]

Ah, goodness. That was hot.

♥

[kagayachou]

That's good to hear ^_^

[amaterasu08]

Well... another one to add to my memories. You do my heart good. :D

About the first part of the drabble, I think you kind of lost the 'Kyouya-essence' there. At least, I didn't feel him much in the first part. And also, the jump from the Tamaki "Im-scared-Kyouya-what-are-you-
doing" mode to the Tamaki "Imma-eat-u-
up-darn-interruptions" mode was a bit jarring. Though I loved the Tamaki seme mode. Really.

phenomenally difficult to approach...
-- I liked how this came across to me. It's like, Kyouya was at a loss how to set up a meeting with Nekozawa as IF he's actually afraid of him. Haha.

Oh, the benefits of being Tamaki’s best friend. Kyouya smirked.
-- oh, the kyouya I love returns! More love for the calculating kyouya please!

Last request: More? Please? :D

[kagayachou]

Glad to hear that - doing your heart good *grin

[amaterasu08]

I love how you describe the jarring part, with Tamaki's "Im-scared-Kyouya-what-are-you-doing" and "Imma-eat-u-up-darn-interruptions" modes. It was what I was aiming for, roughly (young Tamaki going from one extreme to another with dizzying speed that young Kyouya's still not used to)...

Well, now that you said it, it kind of makes sense that Tamaki goes from one extreme to another. It's exactly his personality type. I think that's why Kyouya and Haruhi are the perfect foil for his personality because it takes much effort to ruffle their feathers as opposed to Tamaki's sensitive ones.

, but I wasn't sure if it was jarring in a bad way, or in the way I wanted... or if the way I wanted was bad... Uh, ... *worried look*...It's jarring yes.. in a good way. (Told you I loves seme Tamaki :evil grin:) Though I'm not sure about other readers. I guess that's where subjectivity comes in. If the way you wanted was bad, then... I love you! Hahahahaha!! (:pushes off Bad Tamaki from her mind

[kagayachou]

You're right. Kyouya and Haruhi are more down-to-earth, way more realistic than Tamaki, for the most part... But whereas Haruhi grounds Tamaki harshly and somewhat accidentally, Kyouya deliberately encourages Tamaki's flights of fancy. Kyouya just sorta plays along and supervises, and Haruhi... tries to keep/get/stay out of the way (poor girl). And Tamaki is... Hyper doesn't begin to describe him