Oh my god: it's chapter ten!

[kabeyk]

Yeah, sorry it took ages.

Just on my lj and remusxsirius for now, if you notice any canon-errors, plot-holes, typos or spelling mistakes, I would be very grateful if you’d point them out before I put this on Fiction Alley. Sorry for all my whining and much love to my betas liadlaith and minnow_53, without whom this would be a lot less coherent(but only the end section; don’t

Comments

[liadlaith]

FIRST COMMENT EEEEEE!

[kabeyk]

Heh.

Oh, I'm dying of vaguely-ill-ness.

kx

[liadlaith]

Nooo! Get better soon!

[liadlaith]

Mmm, I loved it! I feel much better about Sirius and Remus now that I've seen how Remus was acting around Sirius in the days leading up to the confrontation.

Good luck with ch 11!

[minnow_53]

Heh, let's do a Kabeyk! *grins evilly* Just back from school run, and will now read it! Great to see it up!
^_^xx

[kabeyk]

*pouts* I've only done that twice. I think...

kx

[minnow_53]

Okay, official comment: I totally agree with liadlaith, it flows so smoothly when you can actually see the middle bit! :D

Though I still think ‘Y’know, this-‘ Remus turned and kissed Sirius... needs the 'again'.

But that is very minor, and I enjoyed finally finding out how it all came to pass... Great stuff. It's so wonderful to see them together! Yay! Joy and celebrations! And to see Chapter 10 at last! Well done. ♥

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Thank god!

I will go and check that bit. I have to edit anyway, as I realised I missed something off the heading.

Thank you!

kx

[minnow_53]

No worries. You must be feeling euphoric!

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Actually more like relieved, a little bit sick (I haven't eaten much today except chocolate raisins), and rather annoyed that I didn't swap tonight's shift at work with someone when I had the chance!

And, yeek, I forgot to do that editing.

kxx

[font]

KabeyK! You have just completely made my week!

Kind of a silly, sick side note, because everyone else will probably point out what's great about all of the Remus/Sirius stuff, but I absolutely love the way you handle McGonagall in this -- I really liked her in Chapter 8, and she is just brilliant in this one.

Thank you so much!

[kabeyk]

Thank you! Seriously, I try really hard to get McGonagall right; I hate it when people have her out of character. Thank you.x

kxx

[wildestranger]

At last! I don't even remember when I read the previous part but this is all and more than I'd hoped for (as you said there wouldn't be sex - I am that shallow, yes), and the way you manage Remus' confusion and gradual acceptance, and jealousy and Sirius' trying to manage Remus' and his own feelings, and how annoying is Julian. I love that moment when Sirius says he has to stop giving him hope, and there's this "Oh he does still like me" thing going on. Can't wait to see what happens next (there will be more, yes?)

I hope this conveys how excited I am about this update. Now I shall go and read it all again.

[kabeyk]

Yeah, sorry about the lack of sex; I just don't think Remus could cope with it right now. Might get a bit more of that in ch11 though.

Thank you! Yes, one more chapter, definitely.

kxx

[wildestranger]

Oh I don't mind the lack of sex, it wouldn't quite fit with Remus' feelings at the moment as you say (although perhaps Sirius could seduce him so he would realise he does in fact really fancy Sirius...). But for some reason I thought there wouldn't be ANYTHING and they wouldn't get together and that would be just WRONG.

Hmm. am clearly turning into capslock!Harry.

[kabeyk]

Hmm... I'm not going to give away that much about ch11... Heh.

kxx