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kabeyk

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Mar 08, 2005 12:42

So I finally did it; wrote J/R/S porn with dominant!Remus and James’ POV too. But it turns out I can’t write PWP, and the actual sex doesn’t start until more than halfway through! Never mind. And Oh My God, there’s an actual plot! Sort-of.

And don't ever let me write porn again! I mean it! Also, I will post this on mpp_ot3, but where else should it go? ( Read more... )

hp fic (threesome)

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coconutswirl March 8 2005, 13:17:42 UTC

I'm in public right nowe so can't read but - oh - the lj-cut text hits my androgyny/girly boys kink.

*sighs with pleasure*

kabeyk March 8 2005, 13:26:02 UTC

Ooh yes. Not something I intended, but then James is fairly straight so I thought it might help...

You know, there's actually a community called andropotterist! I never knew! Harry doesn't suit lipstick though.

kx

coconutswirl March 8 2005, 16:57:23 UTC

Back home: holy smoking salmon! *fans self* I don't mind having Straight!?James in the mix because Sirius is so obvious taken with clever, devious, NotThatInnocent!Remus. In fact, I really, really liked this.

kabeyk March 8 2005, 17:25:05 UTC

Woo! Thank you! I love confused!James, makes me happy. And EvilPervertedScheming!Remus is very fun too.

kx

liadlaith March 8 2005, 13:55:56 UTC

God Remus was a manipulative bastard.

I love it.

kabeyk March 8 2005, 14:00:12 UTC

Hee. Thank you.

kx

minnow_53 March 8 2005, 14:07:15 UTC

1) NC-17.

2) Not suitable for remusxsirius.

3) Remus and Sirius = OTP.

4) You overshot a wonderful bunny, IMO, with Sirius egging a totally straight James on to make Remus jealous: yes, you got a certain way with that, but the threesome took it in a different direction.

5) Not fair to be critical: if I liked J/R/S, I'd love this.

Having said that, here's the good news...don't read first post in isolation. minnow_53 March 8 2005, 14:18:04 UTC

Okay, I have to say that the whole idea of making Remus the motivating force and the centre of the threesome was pure genius: perfectly IC, yet unexpected when you're dealing with the two dominant members of the marauders. You certainly took it a few steps further than the standard Sirius in charge thing I mentioned in my first post, and that make it very original.

I always love pretty Remus, btw.

^_^

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ramen_addict March 8 2005, 18:57:12 UTC

Looks like you definitely got the porn issues worked out. X3

It amuses me for some reason that, even though this is James/Remus/Sirius, there's still lots of Remus/Sirius throughout. The OTP That Wouldn't Die!

kabeyk March 8 2005, 19:00:27 UTC

Actually, I had to try hard to keep the R/S emphasis, because James wanted his own way, the bastard!

But yes, OTP! (And OT3!)

kx

ramen_addict March 8 2005, 21:07:35 UTC

Well, at that point in his life James is still rather full of himself, I'd imagine, so of course he'd try to have his own way!

kabeyk March 8 2005, 23:45:26 UTC

Yes! I tried to get James and Sirius all smug, the eejits, but Remus got the in the end, ah ha ha.

kx

magistera March 8 2005, 18:58:53 UTC

yay! you posted the porn! and it was definitely not bad porn. Very good porn indeed. I'll be very upset if you actually never write anymore :P

kabeyk March 8 2005, 19:03:21 UTC

Aww, thank you! I still find the porn a bit cringy, but I tried really hard with it. (Honestly no double entendre intended!)

kx

Second try: first deleted as lj ate it! minnow_53 March 8 2005, 20:39:54 UTC

Sorry, I realised too late that I'd misunderstood about the pub quiz, as you weren't at work. Sounds wonderful to me. Good luck! Won't go into the 'other things.' ^_^

Shit, in between my deleting my chewed up first comment and coming back to source, you have discovered the impossible. If that comm exists, anything could happen. *mind boggles*

Btw, have you ever read Making Moony Laugh by loneraven? One of the very best and most original of all R/S fics. Brilliant in every way. Funny, sad, intelligent... It's on Rynne's if you haven't. But you will have.

^_^

Re: Second try: first deleted as lj ate it! kabeyk March 8 2005, 23:50:03 UTC

I know, mine was read only when I tried to log in so I couldn't reply, which is soooo annoying as it only seems to do that when I've just posted fic and want to reply to comments. Grr.

I should really try making up comms and user names more often and see where it gets me. Erm, how about i_love_my_brick (this one will never work)

And I totally recognize the title so I'll go find it. Honestly, I have read every R/S that has been recommended by anyone ever, I think! I probably shouldn't be boasting about that...

kx

Re: Second try: first deleted as lj ate it! kabeyk March 8 2005, 23:52:47 UTC

I'm going to go find that person now; a Father Ted fan, surely. It's probably one of two people I know actually.

kx

Damn read-only again!

Re: Second try: first deleted as lj ate it! kabeyk March 9 2005, 00:32:58 UTC

That fic confused me immensely, making me feel like I both had and hadn't read it before, until I realised that I'd read the remix before, but not that version. Silly me.

Yes, it is indeed wonderful and perfect, and it hurts so much, aww. Makes me think of that Grandaddy song that kills me a little more every time I listen to it. Btw, that is exactly how you'll feel reading that book, though it is a good and beautiful sort of pain.x

And if stupid lj doesn't post this properly, I'm going to-- Actually I won't threaten anything really bad because the way it's been going posting properly first time is very very unlikely. Damn damn damn.

kxx

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