Inconvenienced (Edited Fill)

[just2wings]

Pairing: alpha!Jonghyun / omega!Key
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut, α/β/Ω
Note: Fill for this prompt over at jongkeykink, original version posted there.

Comments

[k_pop4life]

OH MY GOD!

OH

MY

FUCKING

BALLS!

HOLY FUCK DUDE

[just2wings]

I hope that's a good "oh my god" lol
Thank you for reading ^^

[k_pop4life]

THAT WAS MY FIRST REACTION TO THIS! that was by NO means my comment as I was hoping after the first reaction wore off I could articulate my feelings (you know how articulate I get with these types of things anyways) but here goes nothing

[k_pop4life]

and let me tell YOU that I read this a good 5 times before commenting because the last part is soooo good and so kinky and just so asbdkfrtdaqsnfz! you are melting my brain away! TAKE RESPONSIBILITY WOMAN!

[yui8_lin]

So, I just. I'm going to read this, and I wanted you to know that it's my FIRST time reading an Alpha/Beta/Omega thing and also first with the knotting and I don't know what to expect but I read your fics always and with the eyes closed I know is going to be good soooo...

I hope is not too much for me though. >.< Going to read it :).

[yui8_lin]

I just, I ASDFDHGFDSSDADASDS *Screams into the night*

Seriously though WHY HAVEN'T I READ THIS BEFORE. It's like I want to read all the A/B/O Jongkey fics RIGHT NOW.

It's so... It's so, I don't know, cute in its own way? I think it's the way you wrote it, because I guess a lot of people could have made this so much more possessive and like all beastly and not human at all but you managed to make this so real and at the same time so fantasy-like.

I just liked this so much you have no idea, the way Jjong was protective with him and was stuck on his door all those times.

Their first time asdadfdg cutie all the way :3 I had learn a lot from this fic *W*

Definitely one of the best parts in all the fic:

“It’s because it smells like you.”

And Jonghyun fell a little more in love.

I died, I was a puddle in my floor when I read this :)

So yeah, great fic, like always actually :).

Bye!

[just2wings]

Yeah there don't seem to be many of these kinds of fics in this fandom, but I hope there'll be more! hehe
You are so flattering :3 thank you very much, I wanted them to remain human above all :) so thanks for that.
Possessiveness and beastliness can also be made to have their own advantages, though xD I just wasn't comfortable with writing it like that I guess
Aw I'm glad you like those lines! I remember writing them and thinking it was a little much on the cheesy side but part of me really wanted to leave them in there. So, I'm glad you quoted it! <3
Thank you very much <3 I'm glad you discovered this verse and I'm doubly glad you liked it ^^

[cuethemusicc]

omg i'm so upset i didn't find this before. like woah. (or maybe i'm glad i didn't find it before because that is why i had the pleasure of reading it now xD). it was so unlike most things i've read, but i'm all for unconventional, and this was such a pleasant surprise. it sounded like a concept that would just be straight smut (which i wouldn't mind if you wrote it i mean come on xD) but you managed to create such an engaging plot. like how do you do this??? ad wow the way key trying to control himself and jonghyun having to witness him suffering was so heartbreaking. and jonghyun's struggle to not take advantage of his situation because he knew/thought key would be very willing, but only because he needed release. you put possessive jonghyun and needy key in one fic? marry me? ;; the plot was so interesting to follow along to and had a perfect mix of emotions. i swear i can't count on my fingers how many times this made my heart stop. when i first read this earlier i was freaking out like i swear, i had to force myself to calm down

[just2wings]

First off, I couldn't believe my inbox today! You are too nice, dearest <3 thank you so much for taking the time to comment on all (omg ALL!) my stuff
I'm so glad you liked this surprise! I wish this verse was bigger in the SHINee fandom but then again the somewhat set roles in a/b/o society kind of annoy me ¬¬ but I do have a thing for knotting hehehe...he... ANYWHO all that to say I know this stuff can be weird so I'm really glad you liked it!!!
I'm glad you liked the plot, too. The image of Jjong waiting at Key's door was the first to pop into my head when I started thinking about this ^^ I really like it, so yay \o/
I would certainly love to have more time to write lately!
Thank you so much <3 Again, you are too sweet lovely <333

[shineeshipper08]

I've read some A/B/O fics but I have to say that this is probably the best one I've read so far. I love the backstory behind it and all the added details. The smut was amazing too XD. I love your writing as well *_*, especially the "Matter of..." Drabble series XD.

[just2wings]

Wow o.O thank you so much! I really wanted to add some backstory and a lead-in, for some reason. I didn't want this oneshot to be just smut! But I'm glad you liked the smut! ^^

[yaoiraburu]

OmG i cant believe i just read this now..
well tbh im not really into alpha/omega verse.. before this!! and this is Jongkey for god's sake... everything Jongkey is pure LOVE especially if its made by u!!! xDDD

this is oh-so-AHMAZIIINGG!! and i start to like alpha omega verse as long as its Jongkey..hehehee
u're incredible.. my heart clenched when Key begged Jong for the first time...and you perfectly ended it w/ super Jongkey sex-marathon...!! mwahahaa xDDD

[just2wings]

Aw thank you! I'm glad you gave this a chance! ^^
Yay \o/ abo verses can be a lot of fun and very interesting. And JongKey just makes everything better xD

Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you liked this! <3