Inconvenienced (Edited Fill)

May 11, 2013 22:16

Pairing: alpha!Jonghyun / omega!Key
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut, α/β/Ω
Note: Fill for this prompt over at jongkeykink, original version posted there.
Slightly edited version )

rating: nc-17, type: oneshot, pairing: jongkey, genre: smut, !fanfic

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k_pop4life May 14 2013, 01:06:08 UTC
THAT WAS MY FIRST REACTION TO THIS! that was by NO means my comment as I was hoping after the first reaction wore off I could articulate my feelings (you know how articulate I get with these types of things anyways) but here goes nothing:
Let me begin by telling you that my previous reaction was good! My mind was blown. At first I had no idea what knotting or the whole omega/alpha universe was all about so I just read it because it’s you and I trust that everything you write will be ridiculously good. NOW, that was not what I was expected and more. It was spectacular and fantastic and I loved the fact that jonghyun was forever a gentleman and kept his hands to himself despite being so tempted by Key and his need for sex. AND CAN I POINT OUT THAT I LOVE THE FACT THAT HE FEELS THE NEED TO PROTECT HIM AND STAND BY HIS DOOR ALL THE DAMM. POOR BOY HAD TO ENDURE SO MUCH PHYSICAL AND EMOTIONAL TORTURE.
BUT THEN KEY WAS SO NEEDY AND SO LOST THAT HE BEGGED JONGHYUN EVEN BEFORE KNOWING HE WAS AN ALPHA AND DEAR LORD CAN I JUST DIE RIGHT NOW BECAUSE IM MELTING ALL OVER. DAMN!!!!!!
But then you have them getting together and then MARATHON SEX AND THE AMOUNT OF TIMES THEY DID IT! SAHIDKANGRNRY HOLY SHIT FUCK ME SIDEWAYS IF THIS WASN’T THE BEST THING THAT EVER HAPPEN TO ME LATELY BECAUSE HORNY!JONGKEY IS GREAT BUT THIS IN-HEAT!JONGKEY JUST SURPASSES EVERYTHING IN A WHOLE NEW LEVEL AND IM GOING TO FUCKING EXPLODE! SHIT!
THEN THE FUCKING SEX ON THE CHAIR CAN YOU NOT? CAN YOU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
(I tried to be as articulate as I could be but you make it so hard on me baby I cant do it)
AMAZING! COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY FANTASTIC ♥ YOU ARE THE BEST

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