Rock My World (Chapter 5)

[just2wings]

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: R / Soft NC-17
Genre: Rock musical!AU, Romance & Drama
Disclaimer: I wish.
Summary: When Onew leaves the Korean production of RoA, Jonghyun is promoted to lead singer in his place and a new actor is also hired. Sparks fly, drama ensues - Rock & Roll.

Comments

[brez_imena]

:D Finally. Wow. I really like this. Oh boys, I hope nothing is going to break those two apart, they love each other so much. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
And Jjong don't be a baby, you need to be strong, even if people are going to give you weird glances.
I love you story.

[just2wings]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying ^^.
I just think of Jonghyun as very emotional - but I guess "baby" is another way to describe him sometimes, lol.
Thanks again for commenting, I really, really appreciate it.

[hitoshisakurai]

OMG YES YES YES
/brb

[hitoshisakurai]

It's past midnight already but it doesn't matter. I can't just read this fic like as fast as I can. I need to savour it. Like, line after line. There's something so captivating about your writing that I just can't get enough of it.
There were so many things I loved in this chapter... I'll try to point out at least some of them since there were so many:
The whole beginning, in which Key phones Jjong. The "The other boy hummed in agreement and Jonghyun thought that waking up to such a sound was something he could definitely get used to." line. It's just so beautiful.
Then, the way you described Key in Jjong's eyes. Also, this:
“Would you... would you be mine?”
“I thought I was already,” he answered, smirking now.

This part at the observatory is so soothing and beautiful...
And, also, I love their characters in here- Jonghyun is so caring and emotional and Key is not a diva type. I mean- not such diva. He doesn't tease, it's so easy to see that he loved Jonghyun so much. There's no smirks and stupid talking. I mean, there are some

[just2wings]

Thank you so, so much! It warms my heart that you took the time to read and write such a long comment. Thanks, it means a lot ^^.
I'm glad you like their characters. I know Jonghyun isn't often portrayed as caring, but I think it suits him (beneath all the cockiness! hihi). I also don't see Key as a Diva, per say. Sure, he can be a bit flamboyant but he's really down to earth and caring, him too. He's not called umma for nothing ;). Don't get me wrong, I love a bit of diva!Key but I didn't want to go for that here.
I am so relieved to hear that you liked the not-really-descriptive first time. I didn't want it to seem rushed or to disappoint :/ because I sort of can't really write full out smut. Oh well.
Morning-afters are fun to write. You get to make it all lovy-dovy and cute. B'awww :)
And thank you for quoting that last line - I found a typo (grrrr). Whoops. Thanks to you I fixed it :)
Your comment really made me smile :) :)
I don't think I've thanked you enough for your kind words, so I'll say/type it again: thanks a million!!!

[hitoshisakurai]

OK, I wanted to let you know that I just couldn't restrain myself and had to read this chapter once again. The things this fic does to me, gosh.
As for me, this kind of behaviour suits Jonghyun perfectly, it's like my perfect Jjong.
I actually think that this 'diva' side of Key is a part of his stage image, and that he's not always like this. He's here to entertain the fans, right? I believe that deep inside he's a very sensitive and emotional person as well as Jjong, just seeing him crying on their concerts is enough for me to say this.
So I'm so happy you made Key such human here ;____;
There are some fics where it's like all in PG or so, aaaaaaand then, after, let's say, 15 chapters there appears PURE SMUT. And to be honest I totally hate it -.- Because it ruins the rhytm of the whole story. Sometimes it's better to leave things for the reader's imagination.
Buuuuuut in your fic it wouldn't ruin anything, that's for sure. Still though I totally enjoy JongKey smut I think that this part was just breath-taking and beatiful mostly

[just2wings]

Awww *pats you*
Thank you for reading and commenting, bb :)

[gigiettu]

KILVJKEWRKGE OMG THIS CHAPTER MADE ME SMILE AND SNIFFLE LERGFEKREJR JONGHYUN ASKING KEY TO BE HIS SO CUTE THEN ONEW COMING IN TO TELL HIM PEOPLE HAVE BEEN TALKING ABOUT THEM AND BURSTING HIS HAPPY BUBBLE MAKING HIM REALIZE HIS RELATIONSHIP IS AFFECTING HIS JOB *wibble*

this chapter affected me as you can tell

[just2wings]

Onew condition is also good (or bad? lol) for bursting Jonghyun's happy bubble. Teehee.
THANK YOUUU for your capslock and for keyboard-smashing and for reading and for commenting!
<3

[just2wings]

Wow, I love you so much for writing that comment :)
THANK YOU