The Pitch

Mar 04, 2007 23:53

Title: The Pitch
Author: junas_stories
Pairing: very much implied Cristiano Ronaldo/Wayne Rooney
Rating: PG (complete and utter fluff, really)
Word Count: 261
Disclaimer: Don't know anybody or anything in this story and am not making any money with it either. Sadly.
Notes: This is a story - okay, a tiny ficlet - for the 5th prompt: Grass at footballslash11.
Summary: Cristiano ( Read more... )

warning: inner monologue, rating: pg, fandom: footie rps, challenge: elevensies, character: cristiano ronaldo, pairing: cristiano/wayne, character: wayne rooney

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aeroporto March 5 2007, 01:50:53 UTC
*loves it* It'so cute :)

Please write more. I love reading Roo&Ron.

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aeroporto March 5 2007, 13:24:19 UTC
Yay!!

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junas_stories March 5 2007, 13:39:31 UTC
Says you. I'm still not sure how I'm going to pull that off...11 stories... *runs around the room screaming* Okay, so I think almost nobody in that challenge actually wrote all 11 but that is totally my plan. I mean why stake a claim and then not do it properly?

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stina_x March 5 2007, 03:55:36 UTC
Oh how beautiful. I loved all the colors and could see it all before my eyes - the flowers, the white, the grey and the green. The last line was very sweet.
Loved it. :)

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junas_stories March 5 2007, 11:45:52 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad it obviously worked since it was kind of an experiment with no plot, only discriptions... *does happy dance*

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karneol_vision March 9 2007, 07:32:22 UTC
Aw the ending... *_*

After all the stress on the ugliness of English weather - the place he feels good among all of it, and the reference to Wayne... *sigh*, because he makes him feel the way the pitch does...

... now that last remark sounded funny, sorry, but you wrote the ficlet so you know how I mean it.

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junalele March 9 2007, 12:22:52 UTC
Totally know what I mean. Hee! Glad you like.

And it's funny how your own surroundings inspire you because when I wrote this the weather was frightful and grey in Berlin. If we had a white winter with much sun I would probably never have wrote this. Funny to think about this...

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junas_stories March 9 2007, 23:12:19 UTC
*headdesks* Know what you mean, of course. Sorry!

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karneol_vision March 14 2007, 15:47:42 UTC
Hehehehe. It's good YOU know what YOU mean either. Surely it's helpful ;)

It's is not exactly strange to see how the surroundings influence you, to my mind that's as it should be. I met a few writers who were solely writing from within, or at least that was their major inspiration, they took hardly anything from the world around and outside. Those were very heartwrenching and interesting stories, I admit, but to my mind when you've written a lot, you start going in circles, and you won't get nowhere this way.
I've turned much more to the idea of influence from EVERYWHERE, from every tiny thing, as it seems the most natural to do.

But, yes, the idea that that ficlet was not in existence if it wasn't for the weather in the right moment... it's funny :)

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hiro_chan April 10 2007, 01:46:02 UTC
Oh my god. It's absolutely, absolutely lovely. A nice beginning describing the English weather, and the ending... just lovely, absolutely adore it.

And wheee, it's about time someone claims Cris/Wayne for the prompt challenge :D:D! And since you've made such a lovely, lovely start, I'm eagerly looking forward for more :D~!

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junas_stories April 10 2007, 08:38:59 UTC
Thank you!!! Glad to know you like it as it was kind of an experiment for me. :D

Actually, I claimed Cristiano though yes, most stories (have ideas for most prompts already) will be him and Wayne... Tehee!

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