eir's tomorrow sort-of update

Mar 07, 2010 14:20

I've done a few pages of the next chapter for Eir's Tomorrow between all the end-of-quarter madness, but because this is one of Those Chapters in which Important Things Happen, I wanted to make sure that I cover everything in this and the following parts.  Or, at the very least, in side-stories, depending on how essential or non-essential something is to the main plot.

So: What do you want to see?  What do you think specifically needs to be expanded upon, addressed, or has been left hanging?  And maybe why?

(Before anyone asks, I do have a rather detailed outline that artimusdin and I are often arguing over updating, but I still want to know everyone else's opinions.  And croix, you'd better not give away any spoilers.  :p)
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