Brandi's War: Chapter Fourteen.

Nov 24, 2009 21:51

I wrote up Chapter Fourteen this evening. Hopefully I can convincingly portray plasteredness, since I've never quite been there myself.

One might argue it's the darkest chapter so far, and they'd probably have a case. But I don't really think it's as clear as all that. Like Two, it starts out more lightly.

I'm not totally satisfied with the end at the moment, but I'm hungry so maybe I'll come back to it.

brandi's war

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