Emerald and Ruby - Chapter I - Untold Secrets

[josephsaren]

Emerald and Ruby -- Chapter I -- Untold Secrets
Title: Emerald and Ruby
Chapter: I
Author: Joseph Saren
Email: niftyboi@earthlink.net
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury

Comments

[electricandroid]

Ah glad - went to sleep confused because I thought I might have upset you - and the frulie would have had my boobs (I guess not balls - not practicable) for lunch!

You are a lucky devil to have got into a relationship like that - so so easy.. to be fair, it has happened to me too - and is the longest relationship i've ever had (still in it now) but it makes my friends sick when I tell them about it!

Yes,grammar and punctuation are the devil's own. Especially words like "Lucius'" versus "Lucius's" (all praise the might saladbats for her beta skills.

Be careful who you find to beta btw... I had one when I first first started writing here (a whole 3 months ago) and my story was completely ruined, because they did not understand what I wanted to do, and I was too spineless to say "Look you are a silly little freak - I like my long words and implied things" So best to ask someone to beta that you have spoken too. I'm lucky - frulie's beta read my work and offered - and she is excellent. (even though I made her cry with parts of it)

Hmm to join the_pimp_cane click on it (as in the link I just wrote) and go to userinfo (if you're not there already, and click "I want to join this group". Simple as that!

*Hugs more - hope to see you in the shrine to looshie's smitey stick!*
E.A.