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Oct 21, 2003 08:57

You drive to work, you drive home, and you watch them. They don't even realise that their cars have transparent bits. They are at their most genuine, because they are alone, or alone together ( Read more... )

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"they" paradox35 October 21 2003, 12:11:59 UTC
Hrm...this reminds me of long drives to MI to see Josh
It's even more interesting at the border.

they fidget,
they hide food,
they turn down the radio only to turn it back up again.
they sing, then remember where they are and stop
they yell at their kids,
they yell at their spouse,
they tell their spouse not to yell back and their kids to hush.
they pull up to the customs window - and
they, every single one of them, acts like a model citizen.

If only the world were a customs office...

...then again, no.

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smallstar October 21 2003, 17:06:31 UTC
You've been writing some neat, thoughtful stuff on LJ lately. It's a pleasure to read. :)

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candelalumina November 11 2003, 12:02:52 UTC
i found you through greg.
but this was most definitely an awesome entry.

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johnath November 11 2003, 16:12:35 UTC
Nice of you to say so. My forays into creative expression are few and far between, but I'm happy to know they are appreciated.

Greg does tend to connect disparate groups of people, doesn't he? :)

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I read this. valentit_love9 March 9 2004, 07:27:17 UTC
I have found this post very interesting.
Stories on http://stories.dmozx.org
http://stories.dmozx.org

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Keep you damn eyes on the road. anonymous May 20 2004, 10:50:51 UTC
.. or the next guy that'll be shaking his head at you will be me!

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