Valediction

Sep 19, 2008 23:13


Title: Valediction
Rating: T
Author: jlrpuck
Disclaimer: Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary: What if Peter Carlisle's mum hadn't died from an overdose?
Authors Notes: Peter meets the ( Read more... )

heiress rose, what if, professor peter

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Prin V Comments 1 of 3 principia September 20 2008, 03:27:39 UTC
Sneakity sneak sneak! Will comment properly shortly...

---No sense in wasting a comment space---

“He looks like the Doctor. The second one,” Jackie added helpfully, helping her daughter prepare tea in the cavernous kitchen of the estate house.

‘Thanks, mum, you wanna put that in a memo entitled “Shit I Already Know”?’

Red vs. Blue is very popular even at alt!alt!Torchwood.

“You’ve spent all of your time with him, since you found him months ago. Have you…have you thought, maybe, of taking a break?”?”

Professor Peter Carlisle is no Jimmy Stone, Jackie.

extra ?” there

Pete had remained silent on the matter, but continued to watch with a wary eye.

She may be his daughter, but they still met one another as adults. He doesn’t have that default of thinking of her as a little girl.

“’s mad, isn’t it? He’s a bit like drugs; I can’t seem to get enough of him. But, mum-it took us almost two years to get this far. There’s so much time to make up; I don’t want to lose another minute with him.”

*considers suggesting Can’t Get Enough of ... )

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Re: Prin V Comments 1 of 3 xebgoc September 20 2008, 13:38:56 UTC


*considers suggesting Can’t Get Enough of Your Love Babe to the AAT Soundtrack*

oh... thanks for that... NOT

now I have to find something to scrub that out of my head... ;)

Has she even told him the skiing accident story is hokum?

yes... she told him that it was work related, that the accident was just a cover story. She told him pretty early on that it was serious and why she was no longer a field agent... she just hadn't told him *how* serious - I'm pretty sure she told him that someone else died, even.

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Re: Prin V Comments 1 of 3 principia September 20 2008, 17:31:04 UTC
yes... she told him that it was work related, that the accident was just a cover story.

When was this? The only reference I remember to them discussing it - prior to this point - was Peter remembering that she'd told him it had been an accident, full stop.

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Re: Prin V Comments 1 of 3 xebgoc September 20 2008, 19:13:22 UTC
hmm... maybe you're right... maybe it was all in my head... or in commentary ? 'cause I'd *swear* she had told him... but I've just gone back and re-read them all today (I know, I suffer so for love of Peter :) and it's not there.

My brain writes all sorts of things that haven't happened yet.

*shrug*

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invderlava September 20 2008, 03:35:21 UTC
I can't say how much I adore this alternate series for Peter and Rose. ♥ The little things and the big things that make up the differences between the two 'realities' are so much fun to look for. And this was such a tender installment, I love it.

Looking forward to Monday! I can't believe I just said that. XD

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angelfireeast September 20 2008, 03:57:25 UTC
Looking forward to Monday! I can't believe I just said that. XD

LOl I'm the same way. The only thing about Mondays and only reason I look forward to Monday is for the next chapter of So things go. I don't know what I'm going to do when it over... cry most likely.

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jlrpuck_fic September 21 2008, 03:07:28 UTC
You have five weeks before ASTG ends, though! ;)

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angelfireeast September 22 2008, 05:59:08 UTC
Five wonderful weeks:D

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crimedoc1 September 20 2008, 03:47:09 UTC
whee! what a lovely surprise before bed - more professor peter! thank you!

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jlrpuck_fic September 21 2008, 03:10:34 UTC
You're very welcome!

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xebgoc September 20 2008, 03:55:12 UTC
oooh... oooh... um... speechless... for now... promise I'll comment... more than just that was lovely...

I'll take my cue from principia_coh and just append my comments onto my initial reaction last night :)

I adore these two. I love that Jackie is really the same regardless of which 'verse she's in... whether it's *ours* (i.e. DW), or the Things 'verse or the Alt!Alt 'verse.

“Just some breathing room, love--to make sure. Maybe even a weekend apart.”

but they have had a couple, right ? She's been down to London a couple of times for work related things...

I love that Peter is great with John in both 'verses... he's still a little boy in so many ways and he gets along with kids really well, much to the surprise of a lot of people around him. My heart just melts a little when he's with kids.

He turned to her, pulling her into a crushing hug, burying his nose in her hair. “Don’t. Please ( ... )

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jlrpuck_fic September 21 2008, 03:05:26 UTC
append my comments onto my initial reaction last night :)

I posted that, passed out, got up this morning, and hit the ground running. Which means I didn't even get to *read* comments until tonight! Horrors!

I love that Jackie is really the same regardless of which 'verse she's in

Jackie Tyler: Multi-versal constant (because she's awesome). *g*

I love that Peter is great with John in both 'verses...

Peter definitely has an innate gift with kids--because, as you point out, he's very much a kid at heart. *happysigh*

this little exchange both broke my heart and made it swell with love for these two

I loved writing it. Well and truly.

So she keeps her house in London - a reverse of Peter keeping the house in Kendal... always a place to escape to... and in this case, since they have a real reason to go to London

She definitely keeps the house, although I don't know that it gets used too often, once she moves in with Peter. Maybe a few times a year? Still--not a bad second home to have...

*sigh* love that is meant to be... ( ... )

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angelfireeast September 20 2008, 03:55:35 UTC
Another great story in a great series. Who was the detectives do we know them? I think we all know who the boss was *glares* Poor Rose has a bad case of survivor guilt. Something I'm not sure anyone really 100% recovers from but Peter is helping her heal little by little. Does Rose still keep in close contact with her old term or is it too hard?

I enjoy how sure of himself and their relationship Peter is that he isn't torn up about looking like the Doctor as our Peter was. He doesn't have those self wroth issues and maybe it partly because how their relationship started (Rose wasn't giving him those wishful looks etc). I love how in Rose's mind doesn't see it. Our Rose is the same think:D

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jlrpuck_fic September 21 2008, 03:12:39 UTC
Who was the detectives do we know them?

We don't, short of the fact that they're Williams's cronies (nope, not Penny).

Does Rose still keep in close contact with her old term or is it too hard?

She does--in fact, she still consults for Torchwood on the side, although it's only ever academic, and not field work.

I enjoy how sure of himself and their relationship Peter is

In the essentials, the Peters are the same; but when it comes to confidence, they're night and day.

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