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Fanfic: The Game We Play - Chap 18 - Part 2

Jul 19, 2007 00:02

Title: "The Game We Play - Chap 18: Home - Part 2"
Author: J.J.
Warning: It's an AU BASED ON THE MANGA. It's unbetaed, it contain some Japanese words, some OOC...
Notes: Some people think that life for Subaru would have been better if he hadn’t meet Seishiro in 1990… I’m not too sure of this…
Disclaimer:
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fic: the game we play

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jjblue1 July 18 2007, 23:53:16 UTC

Well... no... he doesn't quite want to rule everything... just do what he wants, when he wants, how he wants. As long as he gets this others can do as they please...
Actually he wanted Subaru's attention... (which also meant he didn't want Subaru to pay attention to other people...)
He'd done huge progresses from the start... but he still have a long way to go... it's not even six month from their second meeting!
*blush* I'm glad you like the sex scenes... those are always hell to make and I always fear they will feel unreal... and stupid...

anonymous July 19 2007, 11:30:02 UTC

Sigh. That was really good, quite a tiring night let's say, but a really good one nonetheless!
They're so desperate for each other and still Seishirou doesn't understand... yeah, I know, we have to have patience with him, but I really hope he will realize soon that he cares for the little mess at his side (I know that I'll have to wait 'till the end for he feeling - acknowledging - the actual Love).
I Love it!!
Truly, madly, deeply! ^___________^
Hugs
Moko

jjblue1 July 19 2007, 20:24:37 UTC

Seishiro's experience attachment to someone for the first time in life.
He's like a little kid. He has to... emotionally grow up.
If he's not pleased when Subaru's not around he's not going to associate it with loneliness but with annoyance.
He still needs time... and he still have 200 days to figure everything out...

arachne13 July 23 2007, 03:40:15 UTC

Liked seeing the crossovers and loved the little mention of Wish in there. So, Seishirou thinks he can even pretend to share? Find that hard to believe, though I doubt Subaru would mind him being his usual overbearing self. At least even when he's pretending to be the best boyfriend, Seishirou takes better care of Subaru than Subaru did on his own.

jjblue1 July 23 2007, 10:12:07 UTC

^___^
I've fun making crossovers... besides TB doesn't have enough characters... though originary the Gouhou Drug chara should have been introduced differently...
Seishiro's sure he can do everything he set his mind at... besides Subaru's so compliant he thinks they can say they're sharing when, actually, he'll be the owner of EVERYTHING!
Subaru's a disaster at taking care of himself but he mostly didn't care about it so... it's not even his fault. He's not even trying to take care of himself sure he doesn't deserve care.
Poor boy...