Forgive Me: Onew/Key; NC-17, part 2

Jan 21, 2012 23:13

Title: Forgive Me
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (for theme, explicit sexual content)
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Key
Squick/trigger warnings: Issues of consent and control relating to sex.

Part Two )

shinee, pairing: onew/key, author: mimi_oly, !fanfic, rating: nc-17

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long comment is long /i regret nothing wishunew January 22 2012, 09:51:39 UTC
excuse me while I flail around here for a while.
holy fncking cheese balls.

poor Jinki, getting drunk and thinking he rapped Key. honestly tho, I have my money on Key being one of the stronger people in shinee, looks aside. the whole "what are you doing to me" was really good. I was all confused like, wait omg was this really a rape?

lets talk about how Hot Bossy Key is with his comanding Jinki around oh my god. i mean yeah he's the cute Umma who is thoughtful and takes care of everyone, but seriously. talk about a control Kink, cuz I think I just got one. hnnng. even the kiss! no tongue, hands in your pockets. not to quote tell me, but I'm pretty sure all thats missing is a collar and a 'good boy'.

“So we sorta … lost our virginity together,” Jinki concluded.

“Yeah,” Kibum nodded, appreciating the significance of the situation. “Cool.”

this is the best part of the whole story. its a little awkward and adorable, and they sound like slightly lost teenagers. i cant with it.

/also I love your Jonghyun. resident pervert of Shinee
“Hide your crack pipe and your kinky Russian porn,” Jonghyun’s voice came blasting down the hallway. “I’m home and I brought the kids with me."
The best. I love how 2min are the kids. Jjong would be the most irresponsible babysitter ever.

I'm glad you linked this to me, I think I may have written you a book as a review, but its 5am and I have no filter. This is great stuff. Im not a big onkey fan, believe it or not, and top!Jinki really isnt my cup of cocoa, but this story was amazing.

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Re: long comment is long /i regret nothing jinkibumiminho January 22 2012, 21:00:05 UTC
Thanks for reading!
I'm glad you liked it, because I'm sure it was your fic that put the whole issue of consent into my brain, only this time I wanted Jinki to be tortured in a much nicer fashion.
Aren't they cute together on the bathroom floor? Sort of, "Wow, we really did it, didn't we?"

Thank you for the lovely comment, and for reading outside your otp preference!

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