OST Update

Jan 23, 2010 11:47

OST Progress: Revision 1.2 - Read over

OST Progress: Revision 1.1 - Rewrite ( done )
OST Progress: Revision 1.2 - Read over

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OST Progress: Revision 1.3 - Line Edit - MR and 5 senses
OST Progress: Revision 1.4 - Merge and Flow (using Nimbus font, large text size)
OST Progress: Revision 1.5 - Read aloud
OST Progress: Revision 1.6 - Final edit
OST Progress: Revision 1.7 - Read aloud

I've just finished my third rewrite. I think the story is much tighter: I got rid of some characters and scaled the tone way down. And I hope it works, considering it's a short story not the original conception of a space opera.

I'll read over and highlight any section I don't understand, then I'll start the line edit.

I still have LR to revise...as well as SS, Cindy, SMS, and possibly GB to rewrite.

It's a good thing that I chose a short piece to revise this time; I do feel I'm moving at a much faster pace.

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