OST Update
It seems I never posted about this sci-fi short. It's 3000 words or so long, and the draft was done last year.
I wanted something far shorter than BW--that means LR will need to wait before I rewrite it--and something other than fantasy.
So far, I found few paragraphs I liked...but I can see how characters feel jerky and unnatural.
We shall see how this one pans out.
Jin out.
I wanted something far shorter than BW--that means LR will need to wait before I rewrite it--and something other than fantasy.
So far, I found few paragraphs I liked...but I can see how characters feel jerky and unnatural.
We shall see how this one pans out.
Jin out.