BW Rewrite done

[jinkang]

BW Progress: Revision 3.0 - Rewrite

BW Progress: Revision 3.0 - Rewrite

7232 / 7232 words(100%)
BW Progress: Revision 3.1 - Show & Tell
BW Progress: Revision 3.2 - Paragraph edit
BW Progress: Revision 3.3 - Merge
BW Progress: Revision 3.4 - Flow
BW Progress: Revision 3.5 - MR Units and 5 senses
BW Progress: Revision 3.6 - Elimination - Search and Destroy!
BW Progress: Revision 3.7 - Sentence edit - for grammar
BW Progress: Revision 3.8 - Read Aloud

BW Progress: Revision 4.0 - First Reader

Few scenes merged and I ended the story with 20 scenes in 7232 words. Specially near the end,
I just wanted to wrap it up, though I didn't get chances to write.

Already, I can see parts where I should have done more showing, rather than telling. I think I'll work on those parts first.

Self-editing for fiction writers is definitely making an impact on how I look at my pieces.