LR Update

Apr 01, 2009 19:45

LR Progress: Draft 1, Day 26
(working title: Spirit Dancer)

14,919 / 15,000
(99.46%)
Finished another scene, and now two more to go. I don't think it will end at 15,000 words. Probably 17,000 for now, and perhaps 20,000 words after the first revision that will unified the story.

Some of the rambling thoughts I had on this story solidified as the motivation for the villain. I think it makes the character more than two dimensional. Hopefully other readers will think so.

And following the suggestion from the last weekend, I'm changing the climax a little. At least the place of it. I think stopping here will help me ponder a bit more about how it will unfold.

Can't wait to finish this and switch over to HR story. I still have twenty or so critiques to apply in yet another revision, followed by an edit, then a revision, and an edit, etc.

Gotta learn to write; gotta learn to revise and edit!

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