Ryan was fighting in a fog, his brain full of static and reflexes shot. It felt like he was under water, or on the fifth day of a four day mission, and his cheek throbbed a cold heat in time to his pulse. Both men had taken scratches, none worthy of note. But Ryan knew he was tiring fast and Tyrel was closing on the deciding blow ( Read more... )

still need to describe uniforms ( Read more... )

Short one. there's a transition scene missing I think and I need to explain in the opening that the Delta biolinks haven't been working in Rael ( Read more... )

Whether drawn by the contact or instincts Ryan turned, but not to his gunner. His eye was drawn by a swirl of crystal and coffee lying unnaturally still in the arms of a man not very far away who had opposed everything Ryan had been sent to support. The triumphant look on Tyrel's face was not lost on the Delta Squadron commander, who took a ( Read more... )

Anieka was having one of the best nights of her young life. She was beautiful, she was turning heads of men and women throughout the room, and for once she felt graceful under the eyes of real men. Tyrel had escorted her in and introduced her to several of the younger nobility, passing a gentle word to a couple of the young men suggesting dances ( Read more... )

Notes ( Read more... )

This is -- not quite what I wanted, but for different reasons than usual. It's not that I hate my writing, but it *IS* very rushed. The actual "page of writing" I did last night turned out to be a story I- Let's just say it's not the sort of thing I want in my LJ ( Read more... )

It should have been easy. A simple, straightforward mission to an island backwater to introduce them to the wonders of modern technology, witness the signing of a treaty that would bring them into the modern world, and stand by in case anyone tried to interrupt the process. Practically a vacation. But things are never as simple as hoped for ( Read more... )

It occurs to me that consistancy is a good thing. So here are basic personality sketches of our five heroes. Physical descrips are still being hashed out; they keep looking too much like the Voltron-lion characters for my own peace of mind. Questions? Comments? Insane laughter ( Read more... )