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cars (sjm remake)

Sep 20, 2011 19:46

cars (sjm remake)
eunhyuk/donghae, g, crack
sjm are cars; one day hyukjae has a dream that he and donghae become humans.
also for voorpret, as you can see i am really banking on quantity > quality this time, i hope this doesn't disappoint ;~;

( Hyukjae bumps Donghae’s bumper a little, causing Donghae to wake up )

g: crack, p: eunhyuk/donghae, r: g, a: rubyls, f: super junior

Comments 17

oneiric_dreams September 21 2011, 02:32:54 UTC

This was so adorable to read! I really liked how you described the interactions between donghae and eunhyuk as cars, the descriptions were easy to visualize like the Cars movie and your choice of vehicles for the guys were awesome:) pink and purple polka-dotted zhoumi vespa?! Hrmm, so what car was Kyuhyun? and Donghae's car dream is what I want to do~

rubyls September 23 2011, 02:35:17 UTC

asdkfjf ah i'm so glad you found it adorable! and i spent quite a bit of time assigning vehicles to the members, lmao. hmmm kyuhyun would probably be a sensible four-seater sedan! not so flashy, but still, temperamental. :3

thank you so much for reading! ♥

voorpret September 25 2011, 16:42:19 UTC

jay. this was BRILLIANT, omg. i don't know enough about cars or vehicles to ever write something this inspired, the descriptions of each of their types is PERFECT, i'm so glad you wrote this prompt for me. :333333

i feel like i want to quote every single line back at you, but that would defeat the purpose of this comment, right?

AHHH JUST THE OPENING. the way hyukjae wakes donghae up, and the dream donghae was having. ABOUT A FREE EXPRESSWAY. lololol, please write suju-pixar crack FOREVER. AND POST THAT RATATOUILLE MINWOOK!!!! NOW! other people need to appreciate its perfection.

I LOVE THAT DONGHAE JUSTIFIES HOW HE IS A MORE HANDSOME HUMAN THAN HYUKJAE. in hyukjae's dream HAHAHAHA, omg.

siwon would be a harley. YOU ARE A GENIUS. "he uses a lot of gas" --> oh that greasy twat. hohohoho. GENIUS ( ... )

rubyls September 26 2011, 07:44:24 UTC

OMG okay this i posted last because i wasn't really sure if i wanted to post it, but i thought two really short fics did not cut it as your birthday present. D: but i am so glad you liked this eeeeee i was worried ;~;

lmao you had already read the opening! i am sorry the fic went utterly downhill from there :( but i will post the minwook~ and donghae probably feels the need to justify he is a more handsome anything at all times. because he really is, kekeke ( ... )

followtheleadah September 27 2011, 03:06:37 UTC

omg. that was a fun read. adskfhasjfd

rubyls September 29 2011, 01:44:16 UTC

:3 i meant for it to, so i'm so glad you found it so! thank you ♥

drawingintheair September 27 2011, 03:14:59 UTC

I never liked the movie Cars when I first saw it but this makes me want to give it another try. Their interactions are adorable and seem so inherently them it's kind of amazing how well you've pulled them off seeing as they are cars. Donghae here was especially my favorite ngl.

Can't remember the last time I read eunhae but this was so adorable and makes me miss reading my otp otl

rubyls September 29 2011, 01:45:12 UTC

omg i never watched the movie, actually. i love anything pixar, though, and i had a prompt that was too adorable to pass up. donghae was my favorite too, ngl ;) thank you so so so much, your comment made me really happy! ♥

tees2mai September 27 2011, 03:26:16 UTC

omg omg omg loved this!!!

rubyls September 29 2011, 01:45:30 UTC

ah thank you! i'm really glad you liked it! :3