Time Baby (a.k.a. Look! I Finally Managed a One-Shot)

May 08, 2009 02:12

Title: Time Baby
Rating: PG-13
By: Jendavis
Spoilers: Up through Reunion
Pairing: Sheppard/Dex
Genre: Ah, not the very short crackfic that I originally intended. ;)
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: This is for gaffsie's request, who, in response to my request for requests, responded: "Did someone say ' ( Read more... )

sheppard/dex, prompts, sga

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jendavis May 11 2009, 06:12:18 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!

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jendavis May 11 2009, 06:13:12 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad the humor managed to squeak it's way in through all the angst! :)

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gaffsie May 8 2009, 13:13:16 UTC
I don't know what I was hoping for, exactly, but I do know that I'm very pleased with what you came up with. :)

I can't even imagine how painful it must have been for John to watch Ronon slip away from him like that. It's no wonder he's hysterical once Ronon's finally back again.

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jendavis May 11 2009, 06:14:22 UTC
Good, I'm glad. :) It was really interesting to write- not something I would have thought of writing on my own, so your prompt, regardless of intention or results, was exactly what I wanted!

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scrollgirl May 8 2009, 14:35:33 UTC
Oh, that was wonderful! So tense and horrifying and sad. I loved Teyla hugging Torren closer, and John not wanting to feel Ronon disappear from his arms. Loved it!

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jendavis May 11 2009, 06:15:11 UTC
Yay! *bounces*

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scout_lover May 8 2009, 16:29:27 UTC
Oh, man, I love this! Poor John, going from lover to parent and then parent who's trying to face having to lose a child. Just wrenching!!

I did love Teyla as the cool aunt ('cause you know she would be) and Ronon crushing on Carter. And The Ancients Were Idiots lecture is still on the server. was hysterical. I could just hear Rodney saying this.

Your usual great job!

(So, eh, does this mean chocolate-covered Ronon is up next?)

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rubygirl29 May 8 2009, 17:17:09 UTC
I'm responding under Scout_Lover's message because we share a brain, dontcha know ... and she said a lot that I was going to say. What cracked me up was Carter's stuffed Cthulu. Man, I remember reading Lovecraft when I was a teenager and it scaring the life out of me.

Yes, please, chocolate and Ronon next! I've had a darn crazy week, and a little Ronon lovin' is what I need. (g)

Oh, and does Ronon ever get to see those pics???? Or is Sheppard going to save them for his own private enjoyment.

John, naked, yes!

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jendavis May 11 2009, 06:18:50 UTC
I don't know about the pics. I think when John finally gets over the headfuckery, he might just post them all over the gym one day for no real reason. And give copies to Teyla, too. :)

Also: stay tuned for the smut... :)

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rubygirl29 May 11 2009, 11:48:44 UTC
LOL! I'm going to a panel at MW where they talk Gen vs. "Smut". If they attack those of us who kinda like our men nekkid and sweaty, I'm going to make a ruckus. ;-)

I'm still jonesing on Ronon, chocolate and naked John ... naked Ronon isn't a bad idea, either!

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