Safeguarding Altruism

Apr 28, 2009 20:37

Title: Safeguarding Altruism
Pairing: GRI
Author: jemnise
Summary: TWO ONE SIDED. Get it? Because they are fools. And because there are no happy endings in real life.
AN: Okay. so yea. I saw the prompt in gdheartri and was like, I WANT TO WRITE! LOL XD First, because *slapsself* there gabajillion of GRI nowadays. Second, because TODAE is killing me. ( Read more... )

p: gdragon/seungri, author: j

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parkchoongjae April 28 2009, 13:33:39 UTC
SHIT.

^that was my reaction when I realized that it was TOP who hurt Seungri and not Jiyong. LOL. XD

this was beautifully written. Nadala ako sa story. Grabe. Ang bigat sa puso pare. Pero ang ganda. I love the irony and complications of the superheroes theme. GAAH, as much as I'd like to think that this ended happily, I think it didn't. But surprisingly, i'm quite okay with it.

I love how you wrote Jiyong's feelings for Seungri. It's simple and complicated at the same time. Naramdaman ko ang lungkot at saya ni Jiyong. Alam mo yun, he's willing to do anything for Seungri, just to see him happy, make him happy. Kahit na masaktan siya, ok lang. Basta masaya si Seungri.

Grabe. Ang galing nito. Amazing. :D

Isa pa pala.

"I am moving on Hyun. I am moving on. I am trying. Don't do this" were the words he uttered as he hung up, looked at where you are and just went inside in a blink of an eye.
^screams TORI man. I know you cannot help but put this with all the TORI love around lately. And I cannot help but love it. Shucks. Napamura ako nang wala sa oras e. Kawawa naman ang 3 characters na ito. Mahal nung isa yung isa, yung isa naman mahal yung iba. At yung isa, nagpipilit na kalimutan yung isa.

Grabe. Galing :D

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maomao4ever April 28 2009, 14:00:38 UTC
omg u ninja!
i thought i saved the first spot XD
lol

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jemnise April 28 2009, 15:04:23 UTC
EHE. KALA MO SI GD NO? MWAHAHAHA XD

this is like the thing I've been experimenting on. Leaving an open ended story. Well for this, naglaro ako sa dalawang POV eh. So practically, kung titingnan mo, ang stupid nilang dalawa. LOL :) oh and I should put.

Endings are for those who died already, but even in death we all continue with our journey.

True love never ends, it pauses, but it never ends.

LMAO. random me. MWAHAA XD

*bows and waves* salamat. salamat. natouch ako. *wipes tears away* kung ganito ang mga resulta ng pagiging emo, magemo na lang ako for life ROFLMAO XD

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *hugs ate meg*

o sya. maipost na gdheartri ng mabato at makutya ng GRI. taenang buhay to oh O-O

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