Comments | jeff_ayan: Seasonal Love- a writing by Jeff Ayan

jeff_ayan

Seasonal Love- a writing by Jeff Ayan

Jan 07, 2006 23:03

Hands clasped, even through the thinly padded gloves for protection against the cool air, we'll feel the warmth from eachothers hands. We'll take in the feeling of Fall, knowing that once in a while, Mother Nature puts on a lovely show. That once in a while, Mother Nature goes out in a spectacular display of beauty. In all of Her splendor, we ( Read more... )

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jenae_os January 8 2006, 07:17:04 UTC

wow this piece is awesome that you've wrote. it inspires me to write.

jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:20:02 UTC

thank you, you should give it a try. Don't feel bad if you write something horrible; most of my stuff is terrifyingly awful, something I'll pull off something nice though.

jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:23:40 UTC

its different for everyone, I definitely want to see some of your stuff when you write it, though.

confused51388 January 8 2006, 13:16:13 UTC

Awww Jeff... that is so beautiful. Most guys cant write like that. Dont worry, you will find that amazing girl.

jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:28:22 UTC

:) I hope so. How did the piece make you feel when you finished reading it?

confused51388 January 8 2006, 20:15:02 UTC

I got tingles... And I definitely said "Awwww..." right out loud at least 3 times.
It descibes the "perfect relationship"

so I'm Nicole... thisrainpours January 8 2006, 17:51:26 UTC

That's beautiful.

really beautiful.
and not in an ordinary way.
but I guess nothing ordinary was ever really beautiful.
You capture and describe things in a way most people can't.
You're very talented.

Re: so I'm Nicole... jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:27:52 UTC

<3 thanks. How did you feel immediately after\during the piece?

Re: so I'm Nicole... thisrainpours January 17 2006, 11:34:46 UTC

It made me feel the warmth of summer.
It made me wonder if something like that is really possible.
and realize how hard it would be to find someone who makes you feel that way.

<3
Nicoleeee

arabxcore January 8 2006, 18:50:15 UTC

A-maz-ing.

jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:27:15 UTC

thanks, but how does it make you feel?

arabxcore January 8 2006, 20:12:03 UTC

well Doctor Ayan... it makes me feel like there is hope. and then that gets squashed by the grasp that it is you. and guys with just those ideas in mind, do not exist.
hahah =)

arabxcore January 8 2006, 20:58:17 UTC

(btw I didn't mean this in any offense to you, in whatever way you took it)

tinydancer_08 January 8 2006, 18:53:42 UTC

*falls out of chair*

Wow

Awesome. Amazing. Beautiful.

The world needs more guys that think like you.

jeff_ayan January 8 2006, 19:25:57 UTC

thanks. But what I really wanted what how it makes you feel. How does it make you feel?

tinydancer_08 January 8 2006, 19:34:50 UTC

How does it make me feel?
I guess it leaves you with a feeling of longing, for what was described.
Anyone would want that kind of relationship.