Chocolate Fic for calledinvain

[cupid_johnny]

To: calledinvain
From: yumenosete

Title: If
Pairing: Ikuta Toma/Horikita Maki
Rating: PG
Summary: Toma imagined different scenarios if he met Maki in different ways.
A/N: Happy White Day calledinvain! I tried writing the Ohno/Meisa meeting in the theater idea but it became gigantic that I didn't get to complete it within the deadine. Hope you'd like this still since it is Toma/

Comments

[astrangerenters]

This was very sweet. I like thinking about all the things that have to come together in someone's life just so you meet the right person at the right time :)

[yumenosete]

oh thank you! ♥ I appreciate the sweet comment too :D

[wintersdancer]

I really liked this fic. It was sweet, and I loved the "what if" road you decided to took to tell us this story ♥ So many things could have been different but they are not and so here they are. I also loved that Toma said he'd be searching if they hadn't met.
This was really lovely ♥

[yumenosete]

So many things could have been different but they are not and so here they are.

You just put into a single sentence what I was aiming to portray in 1000+ words. ♥ I love that it was achieved :D Of course, thank you for liking the searching part too.

Thank you for thinking it was lovely ♥

[calledinvain]

Thank you ~! My favorite line is the one others have mentioned above, that Toma would still be searching if they had't met. I love that through all of this, it could still have worked as just a perfectly platonic gen fic - because Toma and Maki's friendship has always been so important to both of them. I like all the possible scenarios, that it starts from a what if 'normal' situation and then up to their present reality and then finally domestic bliss. ^^

I didn't know that about Toma's family, is it true? That's adorable.

Thank you again for writing this for me.

[yumenosete]

That was a relief! I don't really know what your reaction would be to this since I did ask for a clarification for the AU stuff and then sent me that challenge and naturally I would take it and start writing and plotting but after three drafts with no end in sight, I just have to revert back to Toma/Maki which is the product of my Toma Research, as my friend would call it :D (because I sadly not know much about him)

and about Toma's family, I believe it was mentioned in an old Shin Domoto Kyoudai episode. So unless he was lying then, it is true?

and you're welcome. I was afraid you'll be expecting the Ohno/Meisa fic too much that this would've been a disappointment for you but I will continue that. I don't know how long it would take but I will :)

[phrenk]

Aww, so sweet! I really enjoyed reading Toma's musings on his lovely relationship with Maki. <3 Thank you for sharing! ♥

[yumenosete]

LOL Toma musings are the one of the best musings there is (for me) ♥ Thank you for reading :D

[melonpaan]

I know I'm just parroting what everyone else has said, but "I'd be searching." and Toma's overall musings about the hows and whys and what ifs of meeting Maki were so very sweet! ♥

[yumenosete]

Toma has a very vivid imagination regarding his ideal scenarios XD thank you for commenting on the sweetness of this fic ♥