Title: Our Father 2/? Author: Kelsey Rating: PG-13 for now Pairing: Danny/Jordan Spoilers: Up to and including Monday Word Count: 1750 Summary/Disclaimer: see Chapter 1 A/N: Thanks again to my beta scoob2222 and creative advice from Kevin
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I really liked this part. I like that you introduced Roger as a character and he wasn't just mentioned like in other pieces (and in the show). Did that make sense? I'm not sure xD
Just wanted to tell you, that this fic is my favorite one, 'cause all these with nc17 rating are so boring: they sleep together and that's it and here i see a very good language and a very interesting beginning) and your Danny and Jordan are very realistic, just like in the show. so i hope this story will be long, so we can enjoy it) thank you
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I really liked this part. I like that you introduced Roger as a character and he wasn't just mentioned like in other pieces (and in the show). Did that make sense? I'm not sure xD
Lovely work.
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Loved the Tommy/Lucy stuff, by the way. Nice little insertion there.
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I can't WAIT for the date. Now write it.
This comment is from Anon. Anon was in your room today. And he left your friend something. So thats who Anon is ;)
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and here i see a very good language and a very interesting beginning) and your Danny and Jordan are very realistic, just like in the show.
so i hope this story will be long, so we can enjoy it)
thank you
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