Fic: Our Father 2/?

Jan 30, 2007 20:04

Title: Our Father 2/?
Author: Kelsey
Rating: PG-13 for now
Pairing: Danny/Jordan
Spoilers: Up to and including Monday
Word Count: 1750
Summary/Disclaimer: see Chapter 1
A/N: Thanks again to my beta scoob2222 and creative advice from Kevin ( Read more... )

father series, fic, s60

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jezzibella January 31 2007, 01:33:47 UTC
I was so excited when I saw this was posted! :)

I really liked this part. I like that you introduced Roger as a character and he wasn't just mentioned like in other pieces (and in the show). Did that make sense? I'm not sure xD

Lovely work.

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hopeful_writer January 31 2007, 03:10:10 UTC
Aw, I wish Danny'd decked him. But, yeah, this was an awesome chapter. I'm looking forward to more.

Loved the Tommy/Lucy stuff, by the way. Nice little insertion there.

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!!!! anonymous February 1 2007, 04:49:24 UTC
Your writing makes me do a happy dance.

I can't WAIT for the date. Now write it.

This comment is from Anon. Anon was in your room today. And he left your friend something. So thats who Anon is ;)

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gws February 4 2007, 11:09:57 UTC
Just wanted to tell you, that this fic is my favorite one, 'cause all these with nc17 rating are so boring: they sleep together and that's it
and here i see a very good language and a very interesting beginning) and your Danny and Jordan are very realistic, just like in the show.
so i hope this story will be long, so we can enjoy it)
thank you

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