Taking a page from del_kaidin, here's chapter one of an original fic I'm working on. Opinions, concrit, general crit, and all other forms of feedback are welcome and appreciated. I'll screen comments, so feel free to be as brutal as you want.

( Chapter One )

Dear Mark:
Kindly remove your head from wherever it is that you so inconveniently stuck it and work with me here. I've been waiting for you to talk for days now and you're holding up progress.
No Love,
Me

Dear Luc and Seraf:
Shut up. Both of you. Especially Seraf.
No Grudging Love ( Read more... )

Oh, gods, I'm hooked. So totally hooked. Resmiranda's House of the Moon is addictive in ways I never thought possible. I mean, I don't even like Sess/Kagome pairings. Moral: just because something is popular does not mean it is bad. Sometimes. Unless there are cheerleaders ( Read more... )