[ I DREAM OF YOU / fanfiction / G / family, hurt and comfort ]
Tilte: I Dream of You
Rating: G
Warnings: N/A
Summary: Little Japan has just witnessed his first war and it terrified him. When he can't sleep, a little loving guidance from his older brother can go a long way...
( Even the moon can't sleep... )
Rating: G
Warnings: N/A
Summary: Little Japan has just witnessed his first war and it terrified him. When he can't sleep, a little loving guidance from his older brother can go a long way...
( Even the moon can't sleep... )
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However, if you could, please use an LJ cut for the rest of the story. Notice how everyone else never leaves the whole of their story in the open? That's so that friends' pages will not have to scroll too much.
I'm ten minutes away from catching a flight (despite the snow) so I'll leave a longer review when I get home (9 hours later).
However - I must say, I love the familial!love that you have going between Japan and China here! I'm in the middle of writing a relatively heated conversation (which, no, does not lead to smut) between the two of them, and gah! So, naturally, reading this fic was a really nice reprieve. Really sweet, fluffy, and... much love for the inclusion of various moon!references~
*runs off to go check other things - I'll leave a longer review - more gushy - later*
Please, please, please use a cut! <3 (If you don't know how, LJ has it on their FAQ)
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Yeah, I'll have to do that since I happen to be (proudly) technologically challenged. :D
Whoa, nine hour flight? Well, best of luck (and possible fanfic writing 'cuz long flights are awesome like that).
I'm glad you like it. I was kind of iffy on it since it's my first kink and kind of a rush job (wait, what?!) so I'm glad it came out okay.
Okay, I don't want to make you late! Sayonara, zaijian, bon voyage~
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"Wa"? Maybe I should change it...
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I know that when I feel sad that still have I need to protect them
Otherwise! Lemme give a big, long, gushy: AWWWWWWW. Because it was. And they're adorable like that, particularly Japan, who I can totally see with those wide-eyed googlies and d'awww~~. As I've stated before, and cannot stress enough, it's so nice to have some non-pairing fic in the community as well! Of course it's a romance-oriented community, but, like you said in the discussion!post, Kiku and Yao have so many other relations, it's really nice to see the familial side explored ( ... )
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(Princess Kaguya? :O Man, I should've looked into legends a bit more... I didn't know whether or not Japan had adapted the legends as his own yet.)
I think the "~" is just my way of punctuating Yao's accent when it arises, but I can see where you're coming from. Thanks for the critique as well, so I'll get to changing it around a bit~
(...Now that I think about it, how's about a Dark!Kiku/Yao fic? X3 )
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I WOULD SO TRADE YOU A CHINA/JAPAN FIC FOR THAT. <3 (Why don't you pick a day for the advent calendar? ...if you're participating, that is~)
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Truly nice and refreshing, especially after the continuous rounds of smut/romance (appreciative as I am of those~) we've been getting in the community. baby!Kiku is so cute! (question - is it still child!Kiku and adult!Yao in the whoel of your story? ...or is there an implied timeskip?)
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